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  1. Date: 9/4/2012 10:50:00 AM
    awesome poem, that one can only be inspired by, i know i am.

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 9:40:00 AM
    bono will rock when he reads this, tristen... your use of images elevates this piece to a level of heightened emotion that grips and affect any reader... dazzling!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 4:06:00 PM
    You have such a way with your words, hard to not love you.. just love your way dear, that is all/// had an issue with my bf, we worked it all out.. so smile sweetly, and take good care of yourself. I was telling someone the other day of how I was cold to the Lord when we met, and how much you impacted me! I will always treasure you specially for putting up with all my guff, and still speaking to me.There is 1 that I truly want in my life though, and he is in my life~ (serenly smiling) Lucinda

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 3:36:00 PM
    Beautiful piece my friend. Michael.

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 2:24:00 PM
    wow, says so much.. appologies are probably due to you in some way.. guess I burned the bridege unfortunately so long ago.. sad, cause I do care for you. I will always think sweetly of you, so smile, it's not the end of all things, I appreciate you for who you are, and I got alot from your verse. This one didn't hurt but in realization I am not the same person as I was way back when.. take care, God bless, Love always, Lucinda