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My definition of love

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My definition of love

Baby, the day I saw you first
Dunno how my heart had a burst
You soon became my friend
Would friendship last till the end?
Staying without you, oh that’s the worst

High time it was, I’d waited so long
You’d finally proposed to me with a song
Ooohh I could hardly wait
You were already my mate
I wished nothing would now ever go wrong

We usually sat together like a dove
Now was that really true love, love?
Sad songs seemed so boring
Romance in full sure seemed luring
Now was that really true love, love?

Your lovely smile was now my smile
Our relationship was not at all fragile
I started drawing hearts and roses
We took photographs in various poses
Without you, I couldn’t even stand a while

One day that was, I wasn’t feeling very well
You immediately rang the nearest doctor’s bell
He had a really bad news
From all the doctors we took reviews
I was about to die, they said from their shell 

That is the day when I realized
Our love was never actually very precise
My love had different forms
Between us, we had no norms
I sure had a soon to be demise

Relating romantic songs to you, was not true love
Electricity racing at your touch, was not true love
Your presence at my last breath, telling me 
You’ll never leave, kiss me, caress me
Making me smile, while I die, now that’s true love...

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  1. Date: 9/6/2012 3:45:00 PM

    Yes, I remember this one! Congrats to you in the contest.

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 9:15:00 AM

    congrats on a great write and winning way to define love .. your poem for PD my best friend forever is wonderful ..lots of inquisitive lines for interesting reading luv .. much luck ..

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 5:46:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Apoorva xx

    patrikar Avatar apoorva patrikar Date: 9/6/2012 6:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thankyou :)
  1. Date: 9/5/2012 7:13:00 PM

    Apoorva , congratulations, in the " Define Love! " contest.. Enjoyed all winners.. xox~pd

    patrikar Avatar apoorva patrikar Date: 9/6/2012 6:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thankyou :)
  1. Date: 9/5/2012 3:42:00 PM

    Touching and loving write....you captured the essence of love! Congrats on your win! Hugs

    patrikar Avatar apoorva patrikar Date: 9/6/2012 6:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thankyou :)
  1. Date: 9/5/2012 11:23:00 AM

    Nicely penned the definition of your love. Loved always, bl

    patrikar Avatar apoorva patrikar Date: 9/6/2012 6:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thankyou :)
  1. Date: 9/5/2012 8:12:00 AM

    Well done! Love, Su

    patrikar Avatar apoorva patrikar Date: 9/6/2012 6:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thankyou :)
  1. Date: 9/5/2012 8:00:00 AM

    Truth is deafening.

    patrikar Avatar apoorva patrikar Date: 9/6/2012 6:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yeah it is
  1. Date: 9/5/2012 7:30:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in SKAT's "Define Love" contest Apoorva. Love, Carol

    patrikar Avatar apoorva patrikar Date: 9/6/2012 6:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thankyou :)
  1. Date: 9/4/2012 6:09:00 PM

    APPORVA, Congrats in my contest. Thank you for the support~SKAT

    patrikar Avatar apoorva patrikar Date: 9/5/2012 6:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks skat!
  1. Date: 9/3/2012 12:34:00 PM

    Lovely poignant write, Apoorva. Love, Suzette

    patrikar Avatar apoorva patrikar Date: 9/3/2012 12:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thankyou suzette
  1. Date: 9/3/2012 12:18:00 PM

    I almost cried reading this! Very nice :)

    patrikar Avatar apoorva patrikar Date: 9/3/2012 12:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thankyou kelsey
  1. Date: 9/3/2012 10:35:00 AM

    I can see you put your heart and soul into this one and Skat should see that as well, Good luck in the contest. I enjoyed seeing your many thoughts on love defined.

    patrikar Avatar apoorva patrikar Date: 9/3/2012 12:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks
  1. Date: 9/3/2012 10:15:00 AM

    A truly lovely poem Apoorva. Have a exciting new week. oxox love Anne-Lise :)

    patrikar Avatar apoorva patrikar Date: 9/3/2012 12:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks