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Waves

Last evening,

Standing on the beach,

Watching the waves making rhythmic beat.


                                               Suddenly it came with wide,white grin

                                               Tenderly touching and left again.

Was about to leave,

When it said-

Hey gal,

don't go too far.

I will come back again.

And

There it was,  with the wide,white grin.

                                                
                                                   Waves so amazing.

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  1. Date: 10/8/2012 8:00:00 AM

    Amazing write. Like waves, let your poems splash here. Tfs

    Hu Avatar Mad Hu
    Date: 10/8/2012 9:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you:)
  1. Date: 9/15/2012 10:29:00 AM

    Very well written Poem Mad hu. Your waves definitely created a rhythmic beat with the sound of splashing waves. Beautiful write. Love and best wishes...Ravindra....Madhu

    Hu Avatar Mad Hu
    Date: 9/17/2012 12:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks:)
  1. Date: 9/5/2012 10:25:00 PM

    Good idea to personify the ocean waves. Good write.

    Hu Avatar Mad Hu
    Date: 9/6/2012 9:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks:)
  1. Date: 9/5/2012 8:14:00 AM

    And like your waves, one indeed will keep coming back to your poetry. awesome.

    Hu Avatar Mad Hu
    Date: 9/5/2012 9:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you:)for your kind comments
  1. Date: 9/4/2012 3:42:00 AM

    i feel the tender splash of your words, mad.. truly splendid as always!..:) huggs!

    Hu Avatar Mad Hu
    Date: 9/4/2012 3:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for the kind comments:)
  1. Date: 9/3/2012 10:37:00 AM

    I love this one, the waves personified. a great poem with a surprising feel to it!

    Hu Avatar Mad Hu
    Date: 9/4/2012 3:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you:)
  1. Date: 9/3/2012 6:54:00 AM

    great write about the waves, they are beautiful. Thanks for stoping by. Lucilla

    Hu Avatar Mad Hu
    Date: 9/4/2012 3:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you too:)
  1. Date: 9/3/2012 4:54:00 AM

    Watching the waves ..... I like it too.... A well written poem. - Xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)

    Hu Avatar Mad Hu
    Date: 9/4/2012 3:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :)THANK YOU
  1. Date: 9/2/2012 11:27:00 PM

    I so luv the beach and waves which crest to different shapes and designa like the fluid motion of your words luv .. most enjoyable creation Mad Hu ..

    Hu Avatar Mad Hu
    Date: 9/3/2012 2:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you:)