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Sunset Blues

Miles away from the train rail track-
Baby girl lets not look back-

Walk with me, lets go as two-
And baby sing the sunset blues-

Don't worry bout the distance dear-
Anywhere with you seems all so near-

Now honey we can come as two-
And baby sing the sunset blues-

Now you left me by the train rail track-
With nothing else but to look back-

I look up high and think of you-
And by myself I sing my sunset blues-

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  1. Date: 9/4/2012 4:35:00 PM

    Nicely done. Those rail are only a line that streches far; allows you to look left or turn to your right. The choice is yours, do you look back to what was or look ahead to what will be. Good write.

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 8:39:00 PM

    Enjoyed your poem Jordan, I like the rhythm of it, thank you for sharing vie