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Its you Ssema darling

*****thinking****

i dont know what am feeling?
is it confusion or a true feeling?
whatever it is i am willing,
to dig in and start fighting.

no!! wait!! what am i thinking?
what if its just a good feeling?
let me relax and start figuring,
i know it will be wise deciding.

Ah!! now i know what it is,
its true love,thats what it is,
now i know what my heart is missing,
its you SSEMA darling!!

*****smilling*****

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  1. Date: 9/7/2012 1:55:00 AM

    Just lovely Sarah! Love how you've built up on the theme from the state of not knowing to understanding exactly what it is that's missing. Nice!

    enoch Avatar sarah enoch Date: 9/7/2012 4:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Vicky!!
  1. Date: 9/4/2012 11:05:00 AM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this morning SAarah. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

    enoch Avatar sarah enoch Date: 9/4/2012 11:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so much for the warm loving welcome Carol!!