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  1. Date: 12/4/2012 3:15:00 PM
    this is truly an inspiring poem, just love this, also had me searching the dictionary, you taught me a new word.. Lazuline...

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 9:26:00 AM
    David, ..Love sets in your memory's eyes... forever painted in your mind that is on fire.. :D ,Anna

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 7:32:00 AM
    Hi David...this poem is so sensual and gentle and really nice! Shaz

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 10:18:00 AM
    I know romance must be the last thing on your mind, but this sings of it and love unbroken. Your last four lines are words of angels. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 5:57:00 AM
    A touchly tender write, David! Warm and beautiful imagery accompany these sensitive thoughts. Wishing you all the best! Mikki

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 2:42:00 AM
    Beautiful tribute to the power of else this verse? Cynthia

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 4:19:00 AM
    Hi David very beautiful write like the minds work, all the best Owen, if you have time soup mail

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 12:21:00 PM
    Stopped by for a second read, was even better the second time around... perhaps I will visit some of your older work :) Cindy

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 11:20:00 AM
    a great poem for a great love...I love reading your poem David..thanks for sharing :)

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 6:53:00 AM
    The canvas is no longer white but alight with colors radiating the beauty of the mind. Great!

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 7:35:00 AM
    What a blessed poem for your wife to have written about her...u bring personal healing while u write wonderful verses like these, David, and you let your friends know everything is gonna be okay...I ask God to visit her bedside with His presence and an entire choir of angels daily--hope she senses it! luv to the both of you, gwendolen

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 7:09:00 AM
    Very warm and loving my friend.... Michael

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 1:06:00 AM
    She is truly a lucky lady to inspire such love from you. God bless you both xx

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 1:08:00 PM
    True love radiates in each beautiful line, David! This is poetry at its best. God bless you. Hugs, Rhonda

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 12:55:00 PM
    and the many suns glow for the both of you, david... endearing!... :) huggs!

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 12:37:00 PM
    The love from your heart for this wonderful person pours out like ink from your pen. God's blessings on you both and bright hope for the dawn. One love, David. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 12:17:00 PM
    You have a beautiful heart Bro.....lovely words of love! Hugs

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 11:25:00 AM
    Wonderful, full of love for your beloved wife. Hope you see the "light" at the end of the "loooong tunnel" All good thoughts to all the family. oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 11:19:00 AM
    Beautiful poem, David. Hoping everything is improving for your wife and yourself. big hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 11:05:00 AM
    just lovely!

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