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  1. Date: 11/17/2012 6:59:00 PM

    We should work on meter next ;) [soup mail] Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/22/2012 7:24:00 PM

    Truth and poignant images to describe yhings that we are all going through. Thank you for expressing it in such a healing way. Congratulations on your big win, Yasmin! Love, Hanitra

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 3:59:00 AM

    Wow..Love this Yas!Congrats on your win!!!

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 3:47:00 PM

    hi, again, cutie. i think this is first time I have seen this one? Big congrats on your win. the world surely can be unfeeling!!!

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 9:17:00 AM

    congrats yasmin on a great win for wonderful words defining love ...luv..

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 5:46:00 AM

    Congratulations Yasmin, a wonderful win here, well done xx

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 7:14:00 PM

    Yasmin , congratulations, in the " Define Love! " contest.. Enjoyed all winners.. xox~pd

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 3:37:00 PM

    Heartfelt and excellent write.....congrats on your win! Hugs

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 7:31:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in SKAT's "Define Love" contest Yasmin. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 5:25:00 AM

    Congratulations with a great win in this contest, dearie...

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 6:09:00 PM

    YASMIN, Congrats in my contest. Thank you for the support~SKAT

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 1:42:00 AM

    Don't take past shoves to heart, we can blame everybody for everything until we become adult then we take responsibility for what we do. From what I know of you and your work you are kind and caring and loving and strong, past shoves, shove em girl, and go get em and keep writing xx

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 12:29:00 AM

    What is love without this shove, Yas? Dont lose heart..not everything is lost.., hugs! Jag

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 5:24:00 PM

    Yas, just reading the comments below makes me see how loved and appreciated u are here on the Soup...such warm and encouraging comments. Been thru so much pain in similar ways and so I can relate to this limerick tenfold! It gets old getting hurt by love. I even tho't time would heal the scars, but that is not the case....thanks for sharing this limerick...gwendolen

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 1:57:00 PM

    With each shove in life we grow and become wiser my dear Yasssssss. Luv u Hun. Michael

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 12:54:00 PM

    Sometimes shoves give us strength - maybe we can find ways to rise in love too - nice piece Yasmin - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 12:30:00 AM

    Cheer up. It will be worth the wait for the right person and then the world will seem a better place. Hope you have a great week. Love, Su

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 8:29:00 PM

    Oh dear! you don't deserve a shove! Great limerick, you inspire me Yas. Good luck with the contest.

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 6:27:00 PM

    Wow, very powerful emotions running through this poem Yasmin Penned from lots of wisdom. Best wishes for you in the contest luv.; Love, Gail

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 9:50:00 AM

    Wow, what beauty you have displayed here within this awe inspiring write my friend! I truly love this tremendously incredible, sad, but very well written poem! This poem tells it just the way it is, love comes, it hurts(sometimes it does anyway), you want it to end, the world hurls you across the universe entranced and in pain! Ah yes, I've been there, not fun, but a great learning tool for life! Awesome piece Yasmin, Excellent Work!!

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 6:30:00 AM

    Love can be like a butterfly, are so beautiful when it's there .... after a while it flies away. Have a wonderful Sunday Yasmin. oxox Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 5:49:00 AM

    Don't give up... sometimes a hit comes after many misses...Terry

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 3:57:00 AM

    So deeply expressed this poetry you have displayed here... I love how the last line just wraps it all up, it is so profound and lovely, heartfelt.. Much Love, Cindy

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 3:32:00 AM

    ohh, deeply written from the heart, yas... a beautifully expressed sentiment... winning wishes and hugggs!... :)