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Chasing Time

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Chasing Time

Time is a train speeding down a track
Never braking, never stopping, never to look back.

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  1. Date: 9/9/2012 11:26:00 PM
    The "WOW" factor! Love it! Cynthia

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 3:31:00 PM
    so very very true. love your personification of time. Congrats on the win.

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 10:05:00 PM
    If time is like a speeding train, then mine is going to derail any day now. Good analogy of time to a nonstop train.

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 9:37:00 PM
    ~and it picks up momentum after 35, if you look back, it's like whhhewww! that was a rush! LOL good poetry, short from but alot said in a few words, Cindy

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 8:12:00 PM
    A lady once told me, once you make a decision don't change it, never look back, good advice, congrats on your poem, love debra

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 7:30:00 PM
    JONATHAN, congratulations, with your awesome couplets in Susan's "Time - single rhyming couplet contest " I really am enjoying many of her winners... good night~PD

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 5:51:00 PM
    How true! Congrats on your win, Jonathan! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 2:22:00 PM
    Love the train metaphor! Congrats...:))

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 7:11:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Time" contest Jonathan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 11:39:00 AM
    I like this! Never looking back - that's time alright. Congrats Jonathan!

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 10:21:00 AM
    Very nice and big congratulations Jonathan xx

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 4:16:00 AM
    wow! very GOOD!!!! Cindy Lu