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Transformation

I saw it in the deep river of red,
and goose bumps arose on my flesh.
Stepping in to the cool, cool water,
I sunk deeper surrounded in spirits matter.
Currents took me by the hand
pulling me further across the land.
I came upon this light of blue
rejoicing as away my ego flew
leaving me free to take spirits hand.

I walked with spirit for a long, long while,
relishing the benevolence with my peaceful smile.
He spoke of things that I held within my soul;
A kindness and gentleness was my true goal.
He showed me the truth from his lightness of being
a picture of forgiveness for all living beings.
It was only here that we would find
a pureness of love to carry us during this time.
I thanked spirit gladly then returned back to shore.

Gale Lynne

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  1. Date: 9/8/2012 11:28:00 PM

    i like this poem of yours...awesome write friend Gale...thanks for sharing.

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 11:43:00 PM

    Wow, absolutely beautiful! Just glorious in it's simplicity.

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 8:02:00 PM

    wow Gale love it,I wouldn't want to return,welcome

    Greenwood Avatar Gale Greenwood Date: 9/1/2012 9:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Richard. I loved writing this and actually was ready to return, still I wonder . . . Thanks for the comment