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MY TORTURED HEART

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MY TORTURED HEART


                                          My heart has been crushed and insulted
                                                  By the man I call my beloved
                                                  Because he was not contented
                                          That’s why our relationship was ended

                                                      I was so disappointed 
                                             My tears and pain were blended
                                           Feels like I torn into million pieces 
                                              Can’t stop it, no more choices

                                                 If only he fought for my love
                                             And prove that I am not that bad
                                              Instead he willingly dumped me
                                             So I  was cried and cried foolishly 

September 31, 2012
For  PD Contest "Best Broken Heart"
5th Place Winner

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  1. Date: 4/1/2013 2:57:00 PM
    I read your former reply to me on this one. Glad you survived and moved on. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 10:18:00 AM
    Yes no more tears...find one worthy...congratulations on your win...Donna

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 9:11:00 AM
    Congrats, Maria. Well done. Nice going. Happy Easter. hugs, Ralph

  1. Date: 3/30/2013 11:07:00 PM
    Maria, Congratulations with your awesome poem in my "Broken Heart" contest. it's a tough and painful life when love is broken. Goodnight~LINDA

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 7:17:00 PM
    Love is sweetest when fought for - at least you may go forward and find a man that that believes in living, and dying, for your affection Maria - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 1:36:00 PM
    *.*, In One's Own Struggles Ofttimes, My Dear Sweet Beautiful Maria ˜ What It May Be & Why They May Be ? The Heart Of Another Gets Cast Aside & Or Trampled Amid The Midst ? Should We Grow Beyound This Haze In Self; Be So Blessed; Then As We Die We Realize, Every Heart & Life, Is 'Priceless.' ˜ Then We Learn To Truly Love & Dry Your Beautiful Eyes, For, We've Only Just Begun, To Live ˜ My Love, Tristen *.*

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 1:27:00 PM
    great rhyme poem,,,,, we trip and fall at times,,,, don't we. you have a blessed day ;}

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 1:32:00 PM
    Ah, a deeply passionate poem. I wrote such a poem myself and then it came to me and I asked myself the question, "Why do you want to die, just when he set you free?"An awakening! I was somebody, even without him. Crushed and insulted is not the way love behaves. Cynthia

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 7:51:00 AM
    well written.we should never shed tears who donot deserve it.hope the happy times come to you.

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 10:35:00 AM
    Hi Marie, this is a marvelous poem, so full of emotion, I feel the sadness and the anger in your words, sometimes we have to accept that we cannot control what others do. What if you just pick up the pieces of your heart, mend them and hold them close until that special man comes. Love Constance

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 11:53:00 AM
    Heartfelt write....glad that you are mended. Hugs When we are in love we are blind and don't see sometimes ending it is for the best. My poem 'Battle Within' is such a case, I'm so much happier now : )

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 11:03:00 AM
    honest and beautiful poem

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 11/10/2012 10:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks friend Vesna :)
  1. Date: 9/1/2012 8:41:00 PM
    here's a shoulder to cry on,get it out of your system,not the end of the world,love never dies,each relationship that fails brings us closer to what we are really looking for in a person...

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 9/1/2012 8:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    so much thanks Richard for your advice :) I'm fine now Have a nice day!! hugssss!!
    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 9/1/2012 8:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Andrea...so emotional when I wrote this poem but I already survived..thanks for your words of encouragement and support..hugsss
  1. Date: 9/1/2012 12:33:00 PM
    so sad, and very heartfelt, dear. You will find someone that appreciates your love. He could not have deserved it.

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 9/1/2012 8:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Andrea...so emotional when I wrote this poem but I already survived..thanks for your words of encouragement and support..hugsss
  1. Date: 9/1/2012 9:51:00 AM
    a very profound poem here Maria, wrote from the heart. excellent.

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 9/1/2012 8:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Harry...God bless you always!
  1. Date: 9/1/2012 5:17:00 AM
    There will be another sunrise! Things that hurt instruct...a lesson we all learn sooner or later. Cynthia

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 9/1/2012 8:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks friend Cynthia...yes, I've learned my lesson now...(^_^) have a blessed day!!
  1. Date: 9/1/2012 2:00:00 AM
    Wow!!! So sad but wonderful and excellent write, too my dear friend. Congratulations!!

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 9/1/2012 2:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    many many thanks to you dear friend Nore..congratulations too..
  1. Date: 8/31/2012 1:42:00 PM
    Be careful - never bet on the "most beautiful horse" it will just play to go their own way. Very well written Maria. Take care of your heart and yourself. Have a nice weekend. - Oxox love Anne-Lise :)

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo
    Date: 8/31/2012 11:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    many thanks my friend Anne Lise...it was happened before..so much pain and tears.......that's why I put it in writing..I'm very much okay now :) thank you soooooo much for your support..have a blessed day..hugs!!!
    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/31/2012 1:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    We have come to the August 31.2012 - ... lol ...