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I Dreamt a Dream---Constanza


I dreamt a dream of moonlit night a night of love with only you a love that would soon become true. A silvery moon,Oh, so bright! It touched your face with utmost care to get as if love's little share! It turned the earth a place so white a fairies' land of dream it seemed and drenched us both with silver beams. We walked whole night beneath its light it kissed you with its softly touch Your dazzling face I loved so much! Our hands were clasped and held so tight we neared a little mountain stream and slept till woke up from my dream! ********************************* I dreamt a dream of moonlit night A silvery moon,Oh, so bright! It turned the earth a place so white We walked whole night beneath its light Our hands were clasped and held so tight. **********************************

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  1. Date: 9/26/2012 5:50:00 AM

    A belated congratulations on your super win in Andrea's "Can You Constanza" contest Kash. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 6:21:00 AM

    I like how you summized it below. May we all wake up to a dream.

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 3:25:00 AM

    Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 10:01:00 AM

    Kash, :-). Congratulations with your awesome winning poem in Andrea's "Can you Constanza?" contest. Love it, always~ LUV*PD

  1. Date: 9/24/2012 2:05:00 AM

    Belated Congratulations Kash xx

  1. Date: 9/23/2012 2:04:00 PM

    congratulations on ur win....a flowing a poem of love....:))

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 9:37:00 PM

    Oh, I really enjoy your poems where you speak of love, to be loved so much by someone, is wonderful. Congratulations on this beautiful poem. "It touched your face with utmost care to get as if love's little share! " was my favourite line. Well done. Lee

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 1:54:00 PM

    Ahhh our Kash always dreaming...Congradulations on your fine verse winning. Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 8:38:00 AM

    Congratulations Kash, on your win in this wonderful contest. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 4:36:00 AM

    mera sheraa, congrads on your win.

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 3:18:00 AM

    Wonderful and beautiful piece,Kash...I love this write...Congrats on your superb win...

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 3:17:00 AM

    This was meant to win Kash. Cudn't see ur haiku on my page this time but liked it a lot, very nice. Congratulations on your great win in this Constanza contest!

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 12:54:00 AM

    My hearty congratulations on your win Kash!!! hugs:) Leonora

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 11:48:00 PM

    Kash, Congratulations on your placement in Andrea’s “Can you Constanza? Contest.” There were so many really amazing entries we had a very difficult time deciding. We had to go by who followed the form best, and whose poem was most creative. I spent 4 and half hours going over the poems and Andrea, a lot longer. Thank you so much for your wonderful entry Mahalo, Connie

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 11:18:00 PM

    CONGRATS KASH ON A GLORIOUS WRITE AND FABULOUS WIN FOR THIS DELIGHTFUL CONSTANZA LUV .. SO APPRECIATE ALL YOUR GUIDANCE .. MANY THANKXXX..

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 8:54:00 PM

    Kashinath, I kind of guessed this might be written by you as I was reading it. It exudes that romantic imagery you are so good at producing! Just wonderful! Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 3:12:00 AM

    This is a really beautiful and thoughtful poem Kash. Loved reading it! Great work. :)

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 3:18:00 AM

    very nice romantic poem. Just my style of writing!

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 12:42:00 AM

    Going on my fav list. I particularly liked: "Our hands were clasped and held so tight." It brought back memories of similar moonlight strolls. Su

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 1:11:00 PM

    Kash, this is very beautiful.. and dreamy... love it... always~pd

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 10:26:00 AM

    Wonderful write Kash,, like this much, thanks for your great work...:) SK

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 3:46:00 AM

    Excellent write, Kash. I love this so much. Good luck and best wishes always!!!! hugs:)

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 1:33:00 PM

    oh kashi,only you can write with such wonderful poignancy,what a romantic,if i could comeand read it everyday i would...thanks for checking mine,its not half as good as yours,wishing you luck with this.

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 11:30:00 AM

    So lovely and heartfelt... What a romantic you are. Very well written! Cindy

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 11:12:00 AM

    Another romantic beauty from you, Kash! A little slice of heaven you have given today. Have a blessed weekend. Hugs, Rhonda

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 11:11:00 AM

    i don;t know how michael's contest re-appeared... we just had a tremendous earthquake in a town 45 minutes by plane from my city, manila... we are still keeping tab of latest updates; no casualties reported at the moment though lots of infrastructure were destroyed... stay well..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 11:06:00 AM

    glad to see you back, bud... this is such a flowing jewel!... sure to win!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 10:22:00 AM

    Love it kash xx

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 8:38:00 AM

    Excellent poem, Kash! Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 8:27:00 AM

    A very beautiful write my poet friend! I really enjoyed the wondrous poem that you have written! I just love poems about dreams and poems about the moon, so both of them together really fascinates me! You did very well in combining them both together! I love this write, Great Work!!

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