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A many splendored thing

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A many splendored thing

               
Shattered in pieces and scattered about;
While a heart bleeds profusely anguish speaks out.

How did this happen was he not a good man?
Are we watching him dying from here where we stand?

As blood flows in crimson from the cut of her knife;
Betrayed and abandoned by a woman called wife.

In another man’s arms she slips out of sight;
She did what she had to because she wants him tonight.

Struggling to get up from the place where he fell;
He remembers those words “created in hell”

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  1. Date: 9/16/2012 8:24:00 AM
    Strongly passionate write. Great flow, could continue like the stars.

    Loveless Avatar Jay Loveless
    Date: 9/16/2012 8:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ps. Thanks for the comments, Loved hearing about your cat (:
  1. Date: 9/5/2012 6:28:00 AM
    Sometimes its hard to tell who the real victom is. All three can be victoms at this point.

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 12:47:00 PM
    Sad tale this is. Reminds me of some of the movies I have seen where a spouse kills another one who was totally unsuspecting.

    Taormina Avatar Leonard Taormina
    Date: 9/4/2012 5:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Andrea- movie line perhaps so but t wasn't no movie believe that.
  1. Date: 8/31/2012 5:13:00 AM
    Nice work. Hope this is not a reflection of a personal tragedy. God bless. Keep writing

    Taormina Avatar Leonard Taormina
    Date: 9/4/2012 5:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    manoi A man never tells right :)