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haiku 6

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haiku 6

brittle cornstalks
crackle in the heavy wind --
at dusk the cattle low

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  1. Date: 8/30/2012 7:28:00 PM
    I can smell the cattle and the drying stalks. i do love autumn.

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 1:34:00 PM
    love this one, Debs - I'm still trying to think of something for my hay fever haiku, lol. Thanks - fun contest and congrats on all your wins, of course : )

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 1:13:00 PM
    Hi Debbie, I once loved writing haiku. Now, I don't enjoy writing it as much. I do always enjoy reading yours though. Feedback from you is always appreciated. Hugs, Rhonda

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 12:42:00 PM
    Only good thing about that Debbie, is, they can take the corn stalks and make feed for the cattle...if any is lelt after the wind is done with it. An Haiku that tells a big story. One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 7:39:00 AM
    yes, this brings up such sad imagery. When I was in the Southeast, we drove past field after field of dead corn crops, I would say that Isaac brought the rains a bit too late. Hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 7:26:00 AM
    Debbie you captured the sounds and sight in this haiku. Brought the scene alive, very nice.