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Denise Minney

Date: 1/1/2013 4:31:00 AM

wonderful read - brought a smile to my face

Nasilele Mubyana

Date: 1/1/2013 1:11:00 AM

Lovely read. Debbie's right, wish it did have illustration to it.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/11/2012 9:24:00 AM

Oh I just love this it deserves illustrations LOL, I hope you are entering in my 4 Line contest? Light & Love

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/2/2012 10:27:00 AM

You are so talented, another excellent poem.

John Wulf

Date: 10/17/2012 5:21:00 PM

A clever, fun introspective write, enjoyed it, John. Soup mail.

Lee Ramage

Date: 9/23/2012 1:45:00 PM

A tricky write and you captured the theme so well. I'm sure it will be a winner. Well done. Lee

Robert Pettit

Date: 9/8/2012 10:31:00 PM

Always look on the bright side of life. Good write Rebecca.

Terry Cunningham

Date: 8/30/2012 11:05:00 PM

Right On! My kids are back east.. Thank you for a read that would normally be way outside my box.. BTW, Thank you for reading my insanities; You're a sweet soul.. TC

Becca Lucas Date: 8/31/2012 7:46:00 AM

Thank you! :D

Mark Goodson

Date: 8/30/2012 11:35:00 AM

Ilene, this is one of your best yet!

Becca Lucas Date: 8/30/2012 11:40:00 AM

Thanks Mark! (by the way, I'm Rebecca..... I was replying to Ilene and I did it wrong lol)

Becca Lucas

Date: 8/30/2012 11:16:00 AM

Wow! Thank you very much, Ilene! :)

ilene bauer

Date: 8/30/2012 9:45:00 AM

fabulous! great use of rhyme and so many wonderful examples. to me, this deserves to be a top winner in the contest. good luck!

Becca Lucas Date: 8/30/2012 12:00:00 PM

Thank you very much, Ilene! :)

Anne Lise Andresen

Date: 8/30/2012 6:56:00 AM

You have written a good poem - What's even better: a poem which is fun to read. Thank you for this poem. oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Becca Lucas Date: 8/30/2012 7:09:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise!

delysia hendricks

Date: 8/29/2012 10:52:00 PM

hahaha. Nice writing, Rebecca. You had me smiling all the way through. Well done!! :)

Becca Lucas Date: 8/29/2012 10:55:00 PM

Thank you! I'm glad it made you smile :)

Joann Grisetti

Date: 8/29/2012 10:37:00 PM

A very humorous poem, especially the last verse. Best of luck in the contest.

Becca Lucas Date: 8/29/2012 10:55:00 PM

Thank you, Joann!