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Below is the poem entitled Mom which was written by poet Nathan Fehr. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Mom

The thought of you makes me feel choked
Speaking your name is like swallowing glass
If you were in my arms you would be blood soaked
The foul memories of you never pass

You did nothing good for me
Made me feel like i was rotting inside
I tore out my eyes cause you were all i could see
I wanted to kill you, so i tried

You filled my mind with corrupt thoughts
Forced me to say lies like "love you lots"
But my hate for you, you can never comprehend
I want to watch your pain never end

Why do you keep me here tormenting me
Cant you see what you did to me
Why do you act like you did nothing to make my heart sore
I hate you so what am i here for

You took away everything i ever cared for
I will hate you in my heart to the very core
I want to spill your guts on the floor
Because every day i hate you more and more!

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  1. Date: 6/22/2013 4:07:00 PM

    We do not get to choose our parents.. But we are blessed with the ability. to choose how we wish to live our lives. Look for those choices . Do good for others and you will do good for yourself. That is the infallible way to happiness.

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 1:59:00 PM

    Boy that hate is gonna kill you body and soul. I know what it is like to have bad parents. My parents did things that should have them in jail for life to my siblings and other people. I ended up being raised by my aunt and uncle and came to forgive my parents. Christ will forgive you and help you to forgive them. Look me up on facebook and I will freind you and we can talk through facebook messages if you want, Sincerly Bobb

  1. Date: 9/28/2012 12:05:00 AM

    Intense Times 10! Let out some hate, so love can begin to enter tour heart! The swallowing glass stanza,says it all poet! Expressive brilliance!

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 5:29:00 PM

    A very impressive poem, moms can be the world and take the world... wow... you are very expressive and with deep emotions... i wish for my son to never hate me, or write such a painful poem.. sorry if you have been hurt by the person who should move worlds for you.. this is an excellent poem...xox~PD

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 10:22:00 AM

    Very powerful, and heartbreaking. I am a mommy of two beautiful boys, and your poem, although sad and filled with unthinkable pain for you, has helped me to see how fragile a child is and how important of an influence a mother is on her young. love you for that, thanks

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 8:36:00 AM

    Reminds me a bit of "Daddy" by the late Sylvia Plath. Check your spelling of the word in the first line of the third verse. That word is correctly spelled "corrupt".

    Fehr Avatar Nathan Fehr Date: 8/31/2012 12:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, i was in a hurry but thanks for correcting me
  1. Date: 8/29/2012 10:18:00 PM

    By the way, this poem inspired me to write a verse about my mom. Thanks for the inspiration! With love- ~Laura

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 9:34:00 PM

    Aye. This is quite a powerful write. Strong emotions like ate and sadness make an excelent poem filled with imagery for the reader. Thank you for sharingour poems on the website. I hope for the best in what you do. Thanks for stopping by and reading y poetry. :) Always, Laura

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal Date: 8/29/2012 9:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hate* my* excellent* XD