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  1. Date: 11/30/2012 5:57:00 PM

    David, I find you have an unusual originality (although, now that I think of it, I suppose all 'originality' is 'unusual')... In any case, I like your style, though it may take me a bit of time to get 'used' to it (I've read and enjoyed several other poems of yours, but this is the first where I've felt that I could give a coherent comment) Terry (Good poem)

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 5:53:00 AM

    Hi David, i too like P.d likes your hint of alliteration, awesome poem, enjoyed

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 5:34:00 PM

    David, i love your verse,, you have a little hint of alliteration,,, _stuck, stock, still~~SUMMER SUN SHADOW,~~ <--NICE,,, ABOUT YOUR POEM... my muse is hiding behind cloud 9~ i know how it is, for the wind 2 brush my skin, and still >>I feel nothing when it comes to that old poet inside of me. Maybe once it hits you (me) you will be stronger than before, there is a reason, the block is sitting tight, don't U think? Nice poem, I'm in a writers block state right now, thank you for sharing, LINDA