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Puzzle Pieces For All Poets

I'm writing these words to a poet And that poet just happens to be you For your words shine like prisoms of light That will shine forever on through and through Each day we must fight our own battles Yet try to persevere on is all we can do Writing the words that speak from within us Giving off a release that can only be felt by you All the words are a puzzle of a million pieces That we try to solve each day we live through On this day may you find a thousand pieces With most of them being heartfelt and true
Dannyboy:8-29-12 *To all poets who read my words* :o)

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  1. Date: 12/29/2012 6:08:00 PM

    Only fellow poets understand the mysteries of the puzzle we create, but perhaps there is hope that there is someone somewhere who has a little light go off inside from reading your words, keep the puzzle flowing bro, blessings, Carl

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 3:22:00 PM

    Very nice... insightful! The puzzle pieces fit for the writer... but not always for the reader... unless the reader is also a poet with patience and a penchant for puzzles... Terry (nice poem)

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 2:57:00 AM

    You hit the spot alright.....so true! it's so therapeutic to the mind body and soul to spill out in words that which is deep from within - x

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 10:50:00 AM

    By the way, I didn't mean this is a silly rhyme, far from it!

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 10:49:00 AM

    Very true and well put and it makes no difference if it's a masterpiece or a silly rhyme, every poem is a little piece of us, a clue of who we are. The world would be a better place if more people would write their thoughts down instead of yelling or grabbing for a gun!

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 12:03:00 PM

    Dan, I enjoyed your gem tonight.. Hope your weekend will be a great one.. ;) tc Wilma

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 1:48:00 PM

    Love the rhyme scheme and the story, feels like you wrote it for me. Made my day better to read this!

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 12:39:00 PM

    I do the best I can with the words I've been given.

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 12:42:00 AM

    Well I like the way this puzzle of words read .

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 1:14:00 PM

    Ah ha! Words ARE puzzle pieces and if I read each and every one of your poems, I would see your life's bigger picture...always enjoy reading your work. gwendolen

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 8:38:00 PM

    You have woven your words into a fabric that fit each of us well. Very nicely done.

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 1:24:00 PM

    irresistibly charming, dan... you made my day.. thanks and huggs!..:)

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 4:32:00 AM

    Hi Dan very hard to resist reading your words my friend like this one to, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 4:40:00 PM

    Terrific write Dannyboy....love reading your words! Hugs

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 1:46:00 PM

    bravo bravo,love it Dan,heartfelt and true,you surely put this puzzle together beautifully

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 10:59:00 AM

    I read your words. Life is a puzzle of words and time to write. Cool poem... just for all us poets. Cool.

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 9:47:00 AM

    how kind of you to recognize my genius ;) lol. nice dedication. where've you been?

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 8:35:00 PM

    Reading your words is a pleasure as you share the gift of your heart with kind caring thoughts for your fellow soupers. I like the puzzle analogy, life often seems like a big jigsaw puzzle.

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 1:15:00 PM


  1. Date: 8/31/2012 11:57:00 AM

    hey dan just stopping by to say hello. soup mail have a great day :)

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 5:44:00 PM

    lovely ryhme from you! My friend, you give so much, likea sparkle in the darkest of nights to so many, You are appreciated, as a poet, a friend, and love you man... Cindy

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 1:14:00 PM

    i think the puzzle piece you are missing is under the couch..this poem, in stark contrast, is lacking nothing. 'WRITING WORDS THAT SPEAK FROM WITHIN US, great sentmnt AND THAT'S WHAT WE ARE, A COLLECIVE POET ALL WILLING TO HELP ANOTHER...GOOD PHRASING AND THE METER IS RIGHT ON... I REALLY DUG THIS ONE your phriend and phiend ~free cee!~ PHREEPOETREE

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 12:36:00 PM

    Good thoughts and as always good intention..good man..Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 6:51:00 AM

    wonderful write there sir!

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 10:13:00 PM

    i look at the contests here as a type of puzzle, then see if I can find a solution that someone else will like. very well stated.

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 8:14:00 PM

    A most thoughtful verse...Thank you for sharing! Cynthia I appreciate you visiting my pages and commenting.

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 7:06:00 PM

    Brillant, Dannyboy! It's a pleasure to read your genuine and sincere words. You are so selfless an I admire that about you! That selflessness is easily shown through your amazing work. Keep it up! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 7:05:00 PM

    very nice poem, I liked it Dannyboy!! Hugs - Laila ;0)

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 3:18:00 PM

    Hey Daaaannee,here I am buddy,its a great poem you have written for all of us here,no hard feelings at all,just been a bit tied up with my move to mumbai,India.

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 3:09:00 PM

    dan.. this was a great tribute to the poets here on the soup.. I loved your poem :) thanks for stopping by.. Have a fabulous night cory

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