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Constance La France
Date: 2/3/2013 12:43:00 PM
Nath, about a deep as it gets, well done, and thanks for my placement in Precious Moments contest, I am very honored. Constance
Carrie Richards
Date: 1/31/2013 1:25:00 PM
Yikes....!! I hope this isn't aimed at any one I know and love !! This would be a great entry to the "Famous Art" contest sponsered by Heather (poem based on the painting The Scream). A winner it could be !! PS........and a big thanks for my placement in the Precious Moments contest..... I am glad you liked it !! Thanks very much!
Anne Lise Andresen
Date: 1/29/2013 1:26:00 PM
I can see that you are still alive ....... but you look so old on the photo ... (!) ... (?) .... - (Just kidding) - Nice poem, Nathan. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Michelle Mac Donald
Date: 1/26/2013 3:53:00 AM
This is CREEPY, Nathan. Never had a dream like this. In mine I'm always the one who's trying to run away. That pic of Albert Einstein certainly fits in with this write!:) Keep well and have a great 2013! Mikki
bidyut bikash brahma
Date: 12/27/2012 10:16:00 PM
i don' know what to say. Quite an anger and coldness you got
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 12/16/2012 3:00:00 AM
thankxxx Nathan for my win for Christmas poems luv .. so nice to spread the joyful spirit luv ..
Charmaine Chircop
Date: 12/8/2012 9:42:00 AM
Ow it reminds me of a book i read *buried alive and of stephen king..Very sxary.
Joyce Johnson
Date: 12/7/2012 11:12:00 PM
My . I'm glad you're not mad at me. In fact I thank you for being so nice and rating my clerihew so high. Love, Joyce
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 12/7/2012 9:23:00 PM
thankxx Nathan for my win in Clerihew .. Robert Goulet was a great singer but boy what a cad with the ladies .. 5 wives and too many lady friends to count .. that mustache got around luv ..
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 11/19/2012 1:16:00 AM
thankxxx Nathan for my win in best Haiku luv .. great contest idea and glad u liked my lines .. wishing u a happy and healthy Thanksgiving ..
Maria Paz Samelo
Date: 11/12/2012 3:59:00 AM
Nice poem friend Nathan. So much thanks for placing me in your contest. Just got home from work and I feel so tired and sleepy but when I opened PS on contest winners and saw my name, it makes me awake and smile!! yahoo!! Have a blessed day always!! hugs!!(^____^) Maria
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 11/11/2012 11:02:00 PM
THANKXXX NATHAN FOR MY TOP TEN WIN IN FREE VERSE .. AM HONORED TO BE LISTED AMONG SO MANY AMAZING POETS AND POEMS LUV .. THANKXX AND HOPE U HAVE A TERRIFIC WEEK LUV ..
Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday
Date: 10/24/2012 12:29:00 AM
A little poem for you, Nate... STILL ALIVE Screaming, my contorted face Buried in this hard ground By a naughty Nate, wickedly unsound Natural beauty in my cold palace. I'M COMING BACK FOR MY REVENGE Not scary enough? I'll do better next time! Thank you for inspiring...I think I'm posting it right now!:) Ciao, Hanitra
Carrie Richards
Date: 10/23/2012 6:58:00 PM
Eeeeeeeek !! Wow!!
Tim Ryerson
Date: 10/11/2012 8:27:00 AM
Ouch!...Brutal, scary and very effective...
jack horne
Date: 10/7/2012 11:57:00 AM
wow, scary piece. Thanks, Nate - enjoyed the contest : )
Joann Grisetti
Date: 10/5/2012 5:44:00 PM
Very real - scary though. I do not want to be buried alive. Shivers. Thanks for reading mypoems.
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 10/5/2012 4:06:00 PM
EMPHATIC LINES OF VISUAL PAIN AND REVENGE NATHAN .. EXPRESSED TO IMPRESS LUV ... THANKXX SO MUCH FOR MY WONDERFUL WIN IN DEEP SPACE .. I HOPE U ENJOYED MY ADVENTURE AS MUCH AS I ENJOYED YOUR CHALLENGE LUV ..
harry horsman
Date: 9/5/2012 8:51:00 AM
A matter of fact, poem Nathan, so angry, yet a classic. shades of Poe!
nette onclaud
Date: 9/2/2012 10:38:00 AM
the eerie feel of this is beautifully rendered , nathan.. thank you for enjoying my black diamond piece for you, much appreciated..:) huggs!
Constance La France
Date: 9/1/2012 12:21:00 PM
Wow, this is deep and raw, great writing and I want to thank you so much for my placement in your Black Diamond Night Contest, I am very honoured. Love Constance
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 9/1/2012 4:40:00 AM
HIGH IMPACT VISUAL IN THIS AWESOME WRITE NATHAN LUV ..SENSE THE DEEP INNER FEELINGS IN THESE LINES .. THANKXX SO VERY MUCH FOR MY BIG WIN IN bLACK dIAMOND nIGHT CONTEST .. AN AMAZING CHALLENGE AND AM HONORED U CHOSE ME TO BE AMONG WINNERS .. ENJOY A SAFE AND HAPPY HOLIDAY WEEKEND ..
Sandy Ivy D
Date: 8/31/2012 9:07:00 PM
Let's have lunch Nathan dear. I'll show you how ta eat a baby. O:-) all though you might wake up screaming after a nice lunch with me. On second thought you won't be screaming your head will be twisted so far back in a convolted manner lol. Thanks for the win. Love SandyIvy
Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/31/2012 2:38:00 PM
Ohhhh!Scary..I hope just a work and not real life.Ha! Ha!.Thanks for the honor in being in the winners' circle in your contest..I am honored that you read and found my work good enough to be there...Sara
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 8/29/2012 8:45:00 PM
Ooo..nothing like the movie. I'm asking my self, where is the love in this poem?? Did you sweep it under the rug, my sweet love. People die everyday. SO, I'm happy 2 be alive~without the screams. Do you know what I mean? This reminds me of Jim Carey's distorted face in the movie "YES MAN" LOL~ a frozen scream without the sound. Well anyways, I like the little rhyme in your poem. This makes me want to post my poem "THE UNBORN"~ shhh! she is sleeping, faraway from dreaming. shhh! she is sleeping.
Nick Bagnall
Date: 8/29/2012 9:42:00 AM
How incredibly chilling and unpleasant, puts me in mind of that sequence in kill bill. I like the rhyming scheme abba it's pleaseing when said out loud.