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Hammocks of the Sky

Clouds sweep down to kiss the ground
Drifting o're the breast of morn
Like a sheet slips on thy skin
'Til pillowing noontime skies...


Craig Cornish written 8/28/2012
For Nette Onclaud's Tanaga contest

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  1. Date: 9/15/2012 11:10:00 PM

    Craig, a nice sweet Congratulations with your excellent win in Nette;s " HAMMOCK OF SKY IN TANAGA " beautiful contest. ~ :-) take care* PD

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 5:57:00 PM

    Congrats on your winning work..Great job..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara

  1. Date: 9/15/2012 10:23:00 AM

    WOW, this is gorgeous. I am so glad to finally be seeing it as I review the list. One of the best in the contest Congrats on this win.

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 3:16:00 AM

    Many congrats Craig for this lovely win.

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 12:59:00 PM

    Wonderful verse Craig!Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 10:33:00 AM

    Congratulations friend Craig for winning your awesome poem..cheers!!! (^_^)

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 8:45:00 AM

    Well,I get clouds into my drawing room..early in the morning...your poem reminds me of a lot of things.......its a beautiful write and I want to thank you for your kind wishes and congratulations to you too Craig on your win!

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 4:50:00 AM

    Beautiful write and lovely imagery. Congratulations with your awesome win in this contest!

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 3:15:00 AM

    Amazing imagery Craig. No wonder it is a winner. Congrats!

    Marcum Wong Avatar Connie Marcum Wong Date: 9/13/2012 3:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I put it into my favorites file...forgot to mention that...Connie
  1. Date: 9/12/2012 10:23:00 PM

    Fantastic write, Craig! Beautiful words, flow, images...wow, it's got it all! Big congrats!! Hugs, Rhonda

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 3:05:00 PM

    congrats craig,love the imagery..

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 2:03:00 PM

    a sense, form..image! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 11:58:00 AM

    Craig, awesome cloud imagery, I can wear it, too. Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 9:56:00 AM

    metaphors swivel with grace, craig... well composed with images of breast, sheet, skin, pillow to weave this piece like an ensemble... sweet congrats on your win in my contest!..:)huggs

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 9:16:00 AM

    I like the comparison of the sheet slipping...and love the line "Drifting o're the breast of morn"...I'll not look at the morning clouds the same again. Congrats on your win !!

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 6:58:00 AM

    Craig...this is stunning!! You made the clouds come to life in such a dynamic way! Now WHERE EXACTLY IS THIS HAMMOCK? I'll be right over to sleep in it for one entire day!! Great sensorial delight! gwendolen

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 6:15:00 AM

    congratulations :) great poem!! well written

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 6:07:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Craig as I have just left a comment, this winners list is full of my fave poets, not all I admit but most of them .. xx

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 5:30:00 AM

    Finishing up packing for my vacation and thought I would take a break and congratulate the winners of the "Hammock" contest. Congratulations Craig. Love, Carol