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One Perfect Day

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One Perfect Day

Come on boys lets change some lives
For or girlfriends fiancés and wives
Let’s take their hands and lead them to
The place they always want to be
For one Day of perfect ecstasy

Show them love that only you can 
Shower with gifts and give them a fan
Ply them with drink and feed to them grapes
Show them you are not descendant from apes
For one day of perfect ecstasy

Take them dancing to a fancy ball
Dress up smartly stand up tall
Whirl her around sweep her of her feet
Remind of the Romeo she used to meet
For one day of perfect ecstasy

Take them away from the daily grind
Let their female form drive you out of your mind
Remember the flower you once met and new
She still looks like a petal covered in dew
For one perfect day of ecstasy

Then when all this has happened and she has awoke
Maybe she will remember that special bloke
Who treated her like the lady she wants to be
Happy to belong to man next to she
For one perfect day of ecstasy

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  1. Date: 9/6/2012 5:18:00 AM
    Owen, A delightful verse! Must thank you for caring enough to put the guys on point...I am smiling here! Cynthia

    Yeates Avatar Owen Yeates
    Date: 9/6/2012 1:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Cynthia thanks for the cimment, all the best Owen
  1. Date: 8/30/2012 8:56:00 AM
    Kudos to the Big "O" for his flamboyant lofty ideals. What girl wouldn't melt to be treated as Queen for a day and it might even become a habit! :)

    Yeates Avatar Owen Yeates
    Date: 9/6/2012 1:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Elizabeth thankyou so much for the comment, all the best Owen
  1. Date: 8/30/2012 7:34:00 AM
    Need more of these Owen, both the perfect days and your poetry. awesome.

    Yeates Avatar Owen Yeates
    Date: 9/6/2012 1:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Harry thanks so much, all the best Owen
  1. Date: 8/29/2012 10:43:00 AM
    I'm showing this to my husband! Owen, you know how to sweep a girl off her feet. Well done!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

    Yeates Avatar Owen Yeates
    Date: 8/30/2012 5:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Rhonda thanks for the comment, all the best Owen
  1. Date: 8/28/2012 8:53:00 PM
    Just beautiful Big O... :o) I think besides making this a Fav..I'm going to have to take it to heart,and do what it says! Very nice!

    Yeates Avatar Owen Yeates
    Date: 8/30/2012 5:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Dan how did you know my nickname was Big O, thanks for the comment my friend take care and catch you soon, all the best Big O