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See You In Hell

she went on a hike
over the hill and down
to the flowing stream
she came upon a stomp
she set on the stump
reviewing her life
she envisioned the good times
blocked out the bad
wondering why no one 
ever brought her flowers
as she was day dreaming 
a guy hiked up gave her
mand m's and a flower
she was so happy
next time she got flowers
was at her funernal
everyone was crying
she left a note
you all didn't bring me
flowers when i was alive
why bring them now?
i can't see them to enjoy
i'll see you all in hell

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  1. Date: 8/28/2012 4:36:00 AM

    Such is life... Good poem... Terry

    Cox Avatar Bradley Cox Date: 8/28/2012 6:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you terry
  1. Date: 8/28/2012 3:54:00 AM

    good for her : )

    Cox Avatar Bradley Cox Date: 8/28/2012 6:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you for reading and sharing with me