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  1. Date: 12/5/2012 2:32:00 PM
    . oh...this reminds me of..Mary had a little lamb its fleece was white as snow; And everywhere that Mary went, the lamb was sure to go. It followed her to school one day, which was against the rule; It made the children laugh and play, to see a lamb at school. And so the teacher turned it out, but still it lingered near, And waited patiently about till Mary did appear. "Why does the lamb love Mary so?" the eager children cry; "Why, Mary loves the lamb, you know" the teacher did reply ..PD

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 12:20:00 PM
    Baaa! Baaa! Baaasphemy!! The ending stanzas (moral? lesson? epilogue?) are skillfuly witty! Amen! : )

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 3:41:00 PM
    Oh yes back to your very very best, the message here comes through loud and clear, funny but serious and with subtle innuendoes. just crazy about this man,crazy.

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 3:37:00 PM
    The tempo is too fun to ignore! Suess would be so proud of your tempo, Chris...I also see a few messages in here that delight my soul...yes, family first too...enjoyed much! gwendolen

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 3:49:00 AM
    Yes, it is all a matter of perception...still makes me giggle, though. xxxx

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 8:58:00 PM
    A very imaginative write. Good going Chris.

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 7:48:00 AM
    Excellent poem, Chris! Enjoyed this one very much. Hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 3:38:00 AM
    Whatever are you on about Chris ??

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 2:21:00 AM
    great write Chris... enjoy this much:) luv SK

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 2:19:00 AM
    Wow you are back............. weird but good xx