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When When moonlight touches down on the meadows in hues Do you see its shadows dancing among closed flowers? Or do you see just the darkness covering through Instead, do you just see the light that has shown for a day in hours? When summer’s sunshine, illuminates a warm, comforting scenery Do you hear the birds singing a greeting that summer has arrived? Or do you still hear the flower’s petals blossoming from the spring? Instead, are you left with the wisdom that everything still survives? When autumn leaves of gold and reds are swept away in the wind Do you still see the magical radiance of colors glow? Or do you see another season just about to begin? Instead, you see that the leaves will waken between the spring, under melted snow?

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  1. Date: 8/29/2012 7:35:00 AM

    captivating brilliance Gail.. u constantly portray immense beauty mixed with intensity of thoughts.. wonderful vocab to enhance the lovely rhyme sequence too.. luv it

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 4:51:00 PM

    Gail; This is very beautiful. I love your last stanza. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

    Doyle Avatar Gail Angel Doyle Date: 8/28/2012 4:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lucilla, thank you for always inspiring me with your words to keep on writing poetry. You have such a warm heart luv. Love always, Gail
  1. Date: 8/28/2012 1:19:00 PM

    lovely write, Gail

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 8:18:00 AM

    love this Gail, so profound and deep in perfection.

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 9:09:00 PM

    Ah, a beautiful verse...Enjoyed so much! Cynthia

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 8:52:00 PM

    oh, it's the gem from the blog page. The pictures were so nice with this one, Gail.

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 4:28:00 PM

    What a wonderful display of an awesomely created write my friend! This is a perfect inspirational poem Gail! I really enjoyed reading this fine piece this afternoon, Great Work!!