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HAPPINESS AND DISGUST

When happy kids play in snow
and fall face-down that gives me
the broadest smile.


I frown at people
who litter, wondering
if they do it at home.
  




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  1. Date: 8/29/2012 12:28:00 AM

    i hope the broadest smiles are the one that litter.. great stuff, andrew and best wishes..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 11:41:00 PM

    In some places, there is a five hundred dollar fine for littering. Good pair of senryu.

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 9:10:00 PM

    this is really great, Andrew. I like the unique way you did your senryu for the contest. nice seeing you tonight.