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Wishes

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he blows out candles wishes are a boy's laughter his face is my smile across the ocean a boy falls asleep hungry no birthday wishes

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  1. Date: 8/28/2012 9:28:00 PM
    this is just fantastic, Rhonda. after seeing so many like this, I realize I will be lucky if I make it on that particular winners' list.

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 9:20:00 AM
    Two sides of the story here, wonderful how you did this, Rhonda

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 5:40:00 PM
    this is sad, but out there it is true

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 1:31:00 PM
    Society can be tiring. Happy birthday sleeping boy.Very cute poem Rhonda, love it !!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 12:40:00 PM
    this was wonderful.. I agree with russell you did a good job going from happy to sad.. good luck in the contest cory

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 11:33:00 AM
    This is a perfect entry into Michael's contest Rhonda! I really enjoyed the dramatic change from happiness to sadness between just two short Senryu! You've done masterfully with this form and subject matter my friend! Awesome piece here, Great Work!!