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About This Poem

Smiles and Frowns


Butterfly dreams
touching rose buds of life
hopeful tomorrow


sudden storm
breaking the butterfly wings
withered rose buds.

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27th August 2012

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  1. Williams Avatar
    Lillie Williams
    Date: 11/30/2012 1:22:00 PM
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    I love this one to Kash. You are awesome in your write, and thanks for sharing.
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 9/5/2012 7:39:00 PM
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    Kash. , congratulations, with your senryu in Michael's "Smiles & Frown" contest.. God Bless~PD
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    Carol Sunshine Brown
    Date: 9/5/2012 5:24:00 AM
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    Congratulations on the super win in Michael's contest Kash. Love, Carol
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    Joann Grisetti
    Date: 9/4/2012 6:45:00 AM
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    Beautiful - well deserved to win.
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 9/3/2012 9:07:00 PM
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    gosh, how come I have not commented on this one. I can't believe I missed it??? what marvelous senryu, Kash. Big congrats.
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 9/3/2012 2:01:00 PM
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    roll over and celebrate, kashi.. sweet congrats!..yesss!..:) huggs!
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    Gwendolen R.
    Date: 9/3/2012 1:00:00 PM
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    I like Mandy's comments below..haha...yeah, I hope the butterfly in your poem is not the same one, poor lil guy! Love the contrasting senryu in your winning entry...written with pure excellence..gwendolen
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 9/3/2012 9:43:00 AM
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    dreams and nightmares aye? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 9/3/2012 9:06:00 AM
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    congrats Kash on an outstanding write and win luv .. awesome as always ..
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    Suzette Crous
    Date: 9/3/2012 8:38:00 AM
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    Now I understand the face (in your profile pic)... :-) Congrats on your win with these excellent Senryu. Su
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 9/3/2012 6:55:00 AM
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    Congratulations Kash I have noticed lots of poets use butterflies, they really get a battering sometimes poor things. , well done xx
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    Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 9/3/2012 6:52:00 AM
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    Congrats Kash on your win.... Michael
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    apoorva patrikar
    Date: 9/3/2012 6:47:00 AM
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    touching... congrats on your win!
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 8/29/2012 12:38:00 AM
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    so right on continuity and imagery.. you tied both ends real well.. good luck and huggs, bud... forgot to write for michael's contest!...:)
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    Loo Roll
    Date: 8/28/2012 7:32:00 AM
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    nice work
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    Gail Angel Doyle
    Date: 8/27/2012 1:59:00 PM
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    Beautiful poem for Michael's contest Kash. Awesome! Hugs, Gail
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    yasmin khan
    Date: 8/27/2012 11:07:00 AM
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    very nice Dada,only you can come up with something so creative...
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    Leonora Galinta
    Date: 8/27/2012 9:48:00 AM
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    fantastic write on the theme! i love it. Good luck and best wishes, Kash.
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    Modupe Sefunmi
    Date: 8/27/2012 8:40:00 AM
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    Love the way you approached this theme; best wishes.
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    Yesha Shah
    Date: 8/27/2012 8:17:00 AM
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    Truly awesome write Kash! Your senryus are a perfect contrast with a lot of meaning to those lines. Good luck.
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/27/2012 8:15:00 AM
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    A Lovely Dream, being destroyed. Good post for the contet. - oxox hug Anne-Lise :)
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    Russell Sivey
    Date: 8/27/2012 8:10:00 AM
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    Wow, what beautiful statements of truth you have presented here my friend! I love the smiles, but the frown stands out so much more and makes such a powerful statement, it's incredible Kashi(or do you prefer being called Kash?) I am amazed at your wondrous talent through this poem, I loved every piece of it...Great Work!!

    Sivey Avatar Russell Sivey Date: 8/27/2012 8:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    By the way, your Avatar is awesome!
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    Mystic Rose
    Date: 8/27/2012 6:40:00 AM
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    On a scale of one to ten for beauty this is an ocean's eleven, love it Kash, xxx vie


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