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Time

It's nothing solid yet used to structure our life,
Ages of eternity are filled with love and strife.






Written August 27, 2012
For Black Eyed Susan’s Contest
“Time” a rhyming couplet

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    Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 9/6/2012 5:43:00 PM
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    Sweet write on Time Lee. Well done. Wishing you all the best in the contest. Luv n hugs Michael
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    Cindy Cayton
    Date: 9/2/2012 11:41:00 AM
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    very true in many ways. Thanks for sharing your gift~ Cindy Lu
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    S.Jagathsimhan Nair
    Date: 8/31/2012 3:40:00 AM
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    Eternity of Love and strife, very true, Lee, good luck in the contest..thanx for your pleasant visit, hugs! Jag
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 8/30/2012 2:49:00 PM
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    Lee, you said it's dry where you are. remind me where you are!! well, I have to get home very soon and leave this computer. I hope I can find a poem of yours to read, a new one for me!!

    Ramage Avatar Lee Ramage Date: 8/30/2012 3:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I live in Ontario, around Niagara Falls, its been a hot dry summer for us. Lee
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    Joy Wellington
    Date: 8/30/2012 9:58:00 AM
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    Thanks for your comments on my poem Silence, Lee...I know that there are some very hungry people out there, sometimes even next door to us and we don't even care...I wish some one who has the means would start a feed-the-hungry mob flash. So much for wishing, all the best in the contest. One love. Joy Wells
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    RONNY MADONSELA
    Date: 8/30/2012 6:51:00 AM
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    Love it, All the best for the contest
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    karen croft
    Date: 8/28/2012 6:33:00 PM
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    good luck in the contest!! and thank you for all your continued reading of my work
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 8/28/2012 3:32:00 PM
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    Interesting thoughts penned..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for your time spent reading and commenting on my work..Sara
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    jack horne
    Date: 8/28/2012 11:46:00 AM
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    Yes, this is so true, Lee. Congrats on all your wins, my friend : ) My monk poem was about an entity which an old neighbour told me she'd seen - her husband died a month later

    Ramage Avatar Lee Ramage Date: 8/28/2012 11:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Aw that makes sense, so spooky. great poem. Thanks for your kind words. Lee
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    Erich Goller
    Date: 8/28/2012 8:08:00 AM
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    Time the most precious thing.A heartfelt expressed couplet. Thanks for sharing it,God bless you, Hugs!Erich.
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    nette onclaud
    Date: 8/28/2012 7:54:00 AM
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    timeless piece, lee... haven;t done my contribution to this contest yet... such depth!... best wishes and huggs!..:)
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    Robert Pettit
    Date: 8/27/2012 8:14:00 PM
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    The three people below all said they liked this. Include me as well.
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 8/27/2012 5:54:00 PM
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    PROFOUND. ME LIKEY!!!
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    Leonora Galinta
    Date: 8/27/2012 9:41:00 AM
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    Awesome and well-done couplet from the theme. Good luck in the contest, Lee.
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    kash poet
    Date: 8/27/2012 12:02:00 AM
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    So true Lee..A profound write.


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