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Our love, within for walls

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Our love, within for walls

I want to be alone with you within four walls
We could make our love story within these walls
We could share our love with lots of feelings
without no one knowing our inner secret
My heart is aching for your love and want
our dreams to turn into reality within these walls
Your kisses could make me passionate
and we could enjoy the art of love making
Your hugs can bring our hearts closer
and we could be happy with our love within these walls
We could love each other for many years within these walls
But our love will be spring for ever within these walls
These walls could hear our voice and watch at us
But it keeps all the secrets within these four walls.

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
Copyright @ 2004 – Ravi Sathasivam

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  1. Date: 8/27/2012 5:45:00 AM
    A lovely poem Ravi - Much love and it becomes even more when we have someone to share it with. They say, "we can live long on air and love"!! oxox hug Anne-Lise :)

    Sathasivam Avatar Ravi Sathasivam
    Date: 8/28/2012 10:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your comment Appreciated
  1. Date: 8/26/2012 10:49:00 PM
    Hmm.True.Sometimes the world dont understand the feel.Very romantic but wish the love could flow out too.

    Sathasivam Avatar Ravi Sathasivam
    Date: 8/26/2012 10:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for your comment Mad Hu. Appreciated.