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Falling Time

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Falling Time

A shadow drifts across the wall...
Grabbing time as the sun falls...


Written for "Time Contest"

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  1. Date: 10/14/2012 12:57:00 PM

    thank you so much for your kind comments... you seem to handle many styles very well... few words, big picture :)

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 7:12:00 PM

    SUPER IMAGINATIVE COUPLET MICHAEL LUV FOR TIME IS SO ILLUSIVE .. GOOD LUCK FROM YOUR JG .. XOXO

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 4:36:00 AM

    nicely done.. good luck in the contest cory

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 4:23:00 AM

    Excellent Michael! A sure winner.

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 8:01:00 PM

    This can be a very intellectual piece if you put your mind deep into what you wrote! I really love this very delightful write my friend! What a lovely poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 7:56:00 PM

    Time is easy to come by...but hard to grasp on as moments go by... everything up must come down..especially this smile I wear at times... some times I have lots of it... sometimes I do not...love your entry...good luck in the contest...pd

    long Avatar cory long Date: 8/27/2012 4:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    PD never loose your SMILE.. :)