When I Smile and Frown

I smile when….

     you grin like Mr. Bean,
     burp and fart so loud
     while delivering  your speech


I frown when….

   you don’t show up in our date
   you come home so late
   with an empty bottle of Whisky
       





Written; Aug. 27,2012

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/8/2013 9:10:00 PM

hello Leo, my smiling sis ... lol..i'm laughing at the image up there... well the frown is not funny...i hate it when the people we love can knock a smile down.... loving everything about your pen...pd

harry horsman

Date: 12/7/2012 2:28:00 PM

just found and really like these,, little wonders...

david scott

Date: 9/10/2012 1:42:00 PM

unuasl i dont know what to say ive never really farted in front of a girl i always turtn up on time maybe you need to find a nice guy ywho treats you nice i like the humour though xx davidscott

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/7/2012 7:37:00 AM

Thank you for your kind comments on my poetry Leonora. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/30/2012 11:59:00 PM

Leonora, i like your senryu poems. the funny one and the sad ,, you should be mad one..LOL... goodnight~ PD ...(( and I will open my e-mail tomorrow at work..))

Leonora Galinta Date: 8/31/2012 1:07:00 AM

i'm deeply touched with your comments and visit today. thank you so much. God bless you always my dear PD!

Maria Paz Samelo

Date: 8/27/2012 9:41:00 AM

another awesome poem!!! Congratulation dear Nore :) God bless you always!!

Leonora Galinta Date: 8/31/2012 1:05:00 AM

thanks friend, Maria.

kash poet

Date: 8/27/2012 5:31:00 AM

Hahaha....enjoyed!

Leonora Galinta Date: 8/31/2012 1:05:00 AM

thanks a lot, Kash!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/26/2012 7:49:00 PM

I think BOTH of these things I would put in my frowning category. hahaha. Good ones!

kash poet Date: 8/27/2012 5:32:00 AM

Hahaha..Andrea ur comment made me laugh also...

Leonora Galinta Date: 8/26/2012 8:47:00 PM

ha ha ha, really? this is my first senryu poem, Andrea. Thank you so much!!!! love and hugs, leonora

Mystic Rose

Date: 8/26/2012 7:37:00 PM

I love Mr. Bean, I have his show at home and it always makes me smile, enjoyed your senryu, hugs vie

Leonora Galinta Date: 8/26/2012 8:46:00 PM

Thank you so much, Vie!