Your Heart I Hold by Michael J. Falotico

Your Heart I Hold

I know I told you I fell out of it... Pride was a wall that just didn't fit... Black and white raining memories... Falling slowly but clouding discoveries... Thoughts constructed but a voice with no sound... Hand written rhymes that float around... Some will sink in as ohers disappear... Most will find pages and land with a tear... Flip through slow and you can feel my soul... Swallow my words and your heart I shall hold... MJF


Juniper Lock Date: 10/15/2012 9:09:00 PM this is beautifully penned and presented..JL
Vicky Tsiluma Date: 10/10/2012 12:43:00 AM Nicely done Michael! I love what you said about rhymes - not all stand out but those that do make an impact and that's what matters in the end. Nice!
harry horsman Date: 8/28/2012 10:34:00 AM all written on an arrow head, Cupid comes to mind, here Michael, a wonderful poem from your pen as usual. enjoyed
yasmin khan Date: 8/26/2012 7:15:00 PM love this one Mikes,your poetry always continues to maze me with his flow and beauty of thought that you so eloquently portray...
Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/26/2012 6:14:00 PM Michael, your poem is beautiful.. always loving your poems.., thank you for sharing, xox~PD
Russell Sivey Date: 8/26/2012 12:17:00 PM Oh, Michael, you have written a masterpiece here! I really love the finest of all your poetry right here before me! I agree with Andrea, your last line makes you poem stand out so much more, it is a grand line! Your words are exemplary and so touching, I feel what you were describing deep within my soul...I love this poem! Great Work!!
Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/26/2012 11:33:00 AM Very lovely couplets, Michael. I just love the pattern you made with your poem too. Awesome final line.
cory long Date: 8/26/2012 10:56:00 AM this was very sweet michael.. hope you are having a wonderful sunday.. cory
Anne Lise Andresen Date: 8/26/2012 7:42:00 AM Happiness comes happiness goes love will always remain. Have a lovely Sunday. oxox hug Anne-Lise :)
Shannon Deane Date: 8/26/2012 7:37:00 AM Beautifully penned...luv shannon

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