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Mystic Rose

Date: 1/2/2013 9:23:00 PM

You write excellent poetry, so glad I stopped in to enjoy your verses, keep writing these gems, xxx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/18/2012 2:33:00 PM

Not familiar with this style but this one is excellent. I never thought of dark and gray skys as the arbitor of hope. I guess even darkness can be a blessing depending on the circumstances. Well done Rebecca!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/17/2012 8:59:00 AM

ok, here is another form that can take me hours to do because I love them done perfectly. You did very well with yours and I love the theme, how you are teasing us with the lines about raining coming, just the way the breezes in your poem are teasing with the hint of rain. Good pantoum.

EBRAHIM SHARIFAT

Date: 11/4/2012 2:42:00 PM

NICE POEM. HEY BECCA I'M ABE:)

Jonas L. Rozario

Date: 10/20/2012 1:34:00 PM

Yes lovely Pantoum...very descriptive. Much enjoyed & thanks for all your nice comments.

Lee Ramage

Date: 9/23/2012 1:46:00 PM

A stirring read. I have enjoyed my afternoon reading your work. I will continue later, you are so very talented. Continue your wonderful work. Lee

Robert Pettit

Date: 9/8/2012 10:33:00 PM

You've given a weather report for today in New Jersey. This morning started just the way you have described everything in this work. You have described everything well.

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 9/4/2012 10:37:00 PM

I like this one very much

Khalid Darwish

Date: 9/4/2012 3:06:00 PM

That's so sweet Rebecca! Nice poem for nice topic. My only point of view is that all lines are reading 7 syllables except lines 2 and 5. My question is: Did you make the syllable counting free or restricted with 7 syllables. Whatever would be your answer, I really enjoyed reading your work. It's really touching the heart. Great piece.

Becca Lucas Date: 9/4/2012 3:24:00 PM

Hmm.. That's a good question! It was the word "across" that threw that line off, and it should have been written as an elision: 'Cross the wide expansive skies. Thank you for your observation and comment! :)

chris lane

Date: 9/3/2012 5:55:00 PM

Rebecca, this is Great! Thank you for posting and sharing your words. Wonderful piece! Take care, chris:)

Becca Lucas Date: 9/3/2012 7:19:00 PM

Thank you, Chris! :)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/3/2012 6:25:00 AM

I have a new Fav. Poet.. and its u.... Love this... hugs Michael

Becca Lucas Date: 9/3/2012 6:47:00 AM

Wow! Thank you! That really means a lot to me, especially coming from you, Michael, I admire your work very much.

Joann Grisetti

Date: 8/31/2012 7:44:00 AM

Very well done pantoum. I feel drawn into your scene.

Becca Lucas Date: 9/3/2012 6:40:00 AM

Thank you so much Joann!

Anne Lise Andresen

Date: 8/29/2012 1:38:00 PM

You write very well Rebecca. This is a lovely poem. Continue with your pen, always. oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Becca Lucas Date: 8/29/2012 1:47:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise :)

Richard Palmer

Date: 8/29/2012 9:25:00 AM

good write Rebecca

Becca Lucas Date: 8/29/2012 1:46:00 PM

Thank you!

tristen temple

Date: 8/28/2012 7:26:00 PM

*.* Kind Of Like The Devils Canyon Wherein A River Does Flow Amid The Midst Of A Mostly Barren Land, Sweet Beautiful Rebecca ˜ I Would Liken This Unto Many A Heart & Soul & That, The Living Water Which Flows ˜ I Used To Say A Few Years Ago Now That, GOD, Does HIS Very Best Work Amid The Darkest Of The Bleakest Blackest Nights ˜ Dig The Poe & Love The Light Tracing The Gray Clouds; Very Nice, My Love, Tristen *.*

Becca Lucas Date: 8/28/2012 9:24:00 PM

You are very kind, Tristen Temple. Thank you very much for your insight.

Donald J Bennett

Date: 8/26/2012 11:10:00 PM

Nicely done. Do I detect a hint of a prayer in there? Let the rain begin. Good write Rebecca.

Becca Lucas Date: 8/26/2012 11:22:00 PM

Thank you, Donald. Yes, a hint of a prayer :) and we did end up getting a little rain. Thanks for your comment!

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/25/2012 10:08:00 PM

Very nicely written, Rebecca. You must have more for us to see in the near future.

Becca Lucas Date: 8/25/2012 10:17:00 PM

Thank, Robert. I'm looking foward to trying more. It's a new passion.

Joseph May

Date: 8/25/2012 5:01:00 PM

very nice pantoum Rebecca...enjoyed

Becca Lucas Date: 8/25/2012 7:34:00 PM

Thank you very much, Joseph! It was my first pantoum attempt ;)

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