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perpetual time

This life is time given to us by God on earth After death,another time and space,a new birth.

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  1. Date: 9/6/2012 3:27:00 PM

    Yours was such a special one, Yasmin. How did I not see this before? Did you enter it right at the end of her contest? Awesome, and congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 7:29:00 PM

    YASMIN, congratulations, with your awesome couplets in Susan's "Time - single rhyming couplet contest " I really am enjoying many of her winners... good night~PD

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 5:44:00 PM

    I like this, Yasmin! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 2:33:00 PM

    Love your spiritual take on time, Yasmin! Congrats...:))

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 7:07:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Time" contest Yasmin. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 10:35:00 PM

    your thoughts come straight from the heart, mareey.. so divine.. congrats with huggs! :)

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 8:09:00 AM

    Yas, such a spiritual and uplifting couplet! Good luck.

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 6:45:00 PM

    I hope you are right! Nice couplet! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 5:32:00 PM

    I truly love this incredibly wondrous write my friend! You have written an awesome an time-rewarding poem Yasmin! I can't wait to see the joy of the new birth...although I don't want to die just yet to get there! Perfect piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 5:22:00 PM

    In depth her,Yassie:) Love the message her,positive and uplifting words.Take Care,Arild

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 4:27:00 PM

    Maybe an eturnity with God. Please, no more of this.

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 3:38:00 PM

    Yasmin, very nice poem you wrote with such depth in meaning. Bravo!!! Best wishes in the contest luv. Love, Gail

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 3:02:00 PM

    Hi Yasmin I Do hope so, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 2:56:00 PM

    Yeah, maybe ... who knows - good written Yasmin - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 2:52:00 PM

    To you maybe follower. but not me !