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Can You Still See It

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Can You Still See It


                                             When I was a little girl
                                      I enjoyed studying the clouds
                             The clouds turned into all sorts of shapes
                                       Yes, it was a great fairytale
                                         high up in the blue sky
                                    Beautiful castle with princesses
                                   who were playing in their garden.
                                      I could see different animals
                                              as small cute cats
                                    dangerous fire-breathing dragons
                                    The sky could be an exciting world


                                     I had almost forgotten this world
                                      Today there are many clouds ....
                                            I have to go and see ...
                                                Is it still here
                                              My fairytale sky
                                         I see the clouds, yes I do
                                             many clouds ...........
                            Yes now I see, you're still here my imagination
                                  I see a big bear sitting on a lace pillow
                                       lift one arm and waving to me.
                                        Hello .... yes I can see you
                                                 I wave back





25. August 2012
A-L  Andresen :)

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  1. Date: 11/11/2012 6:56:00 AM
    I like your poem.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/11/2012 8:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Cassie, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 11/2/2012 11:55:00 AM
    Ah...I remembering doing the same thing when I was a small child

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 11/2/2012 12:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Anne, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 10/15/2012 1:16:00 PM
    Ann Lise, Such a lovely write. Enjoyed reading it so very much. It also put me in another world. lol warmest regards, Polly

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 10/15/2012 1:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Polly, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/13/2012 2:46:00 PM
    Enjoyed this write very much Anne Lise- the silver lining of a cloudy day.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 9/14/2012 1:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ann, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/8/2012 3:26:00 PM
    thank you for this lovely poem. I love clouds. I can stare at them all day with their different shapes and forms. Warm thoughts, Ralph

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 9/8/2012 3:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ralph, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/7/2012 7:47:00 AM
    A belated thank you for your kind comments on my poetry Anne Lise. Love, Carol

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 9/7/2012 11:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Carol, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/6/2012 10:03:00 AM
    Loving this gem...A delightful treasure! Cynthia If I have commented on this verse before, I am probably just having "another" senior moment.LOL

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 9/6/2012 10:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Cynthia - - - always welcome - - - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 9/3/2012 8:10:00 AM
    Beautiful versing...I too love clouds! Cynthia

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 9/3/2012 9:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Cynthia, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/31/2012 11:39:00 AM
    this is very impressive work on what you remember best from your childhood. And how you ended it with the bear saying "I can see you." So wonderful!!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/31/2012 11:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Andrea, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/30/2012 5:47:00 PM
    Jus t as lovely as the writer... I appreciate your poetry and you so very much. Much Love, Cindy

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/31/2012 1:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Cindy, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/30/2012 12:41:00 PM
    You should write a children short story..such talent! Light & Love

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/30/2012 12:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hmmmmm......Maybe - maybe not - Thank you for visit and comments my poem Debbie. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/29/2012 3:29:00 PM
    I still love to watch the clouds float by in the summertime but in winter it is to darn cold. I am heading back home tomorrow so will see if I can charm my husband under the harvest moon. ha ha love phyl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/30/2012 2:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Phyllis, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/29/2012 10:00:00 AM
    So did i, only i was a little boy, maybe they were the same ones, the wind is mainly westerly, from Yorkshire to norway with love. love this Anne Lise, you took me on a fantansy ride,

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/29/2012 10:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Harry, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/29/2012 7:14:00 AM
    beautifully woven poetry Anne-Lise .. imagination rules creativity here luv .. makes me think back to my own childhood days of fun .. so enjoyed ..

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/29/2012 7:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Linda-Marie, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/28/2012 10:47:00 AM
    I also still look to the clouds...To see what I can see... :o) Something that helps pass the time when your riding in a car..lol. Very nice... f.e.f. oxox

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/28/2012 11:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Dan, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - I have to see on the road when I drive car. - oxox love always f.e.f. Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/27/2012 2:07:00 PM
    reminds me of the grass blanket days....

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/28/2012 3:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Doris, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/27/2012 9:06:00 AM
    Hi, Anne-Lise! I enjoyed reading your narrative poem. It gives an awesome view of the clouds and I love clouds. When I was a child I play on the smoke as if im flying on the clouds. thank you so much for sharing my dear friend. love and hugs, leonora

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/27/2012 9:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Leonora for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/27/2012 5:48:00 AM
    I love laying on my back and playing the cloud game.. Guessing shapes.. Now I do it with my daughters some things never die..

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/27/2012 5:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Good .... it never die . - Thank you for visit and comments my poem Cory. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/27/2012 5:16:00 AM
    I still do that to this day. I've got too much child in me still. Nice poem, Anne. :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/27/2012 5:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    also have the "child" in me - everyone should have it. Thanks for the visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 8/26/2012 4:30:00 PM
    I did that when I was little!! You can see all kinds of shapes. One time I even saw a shape of a King with a crown and all. It brings back memories. It is kind of funny that we don't do that any more until you mention it lol. Now I have to do that again :)) Awesome, Anne-Lise. Have a great week. Love ya, Toquyen

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 8/27/2012 3:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Toquyen, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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