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Bruise

bruise bruise bruise 
cut 
bruise bruise bruise 
cigarette burn 
bruise bruise bruise 
cut
bruise bruise bruise
broken heart 
bruise bruise bruise 
distracted mind.

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  1. Date: 12/15/2012 6:47:00 PM

    so few words, so much pain. Very effective, well done Kurt.

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 3:27:00 AM

    I feel the pain in every line. Hope the healing has already come! Good write!

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 5:42:00 PM

    Kurt,, Congratulation, with your featured poem of the week, have yourself a great day inspired by "YOU!" wishing you the best holidays 2 come ;-) always ~PD

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 3:10:00 PM

    Very interesting poem... you've really captured it... Terry

    O'Leary Avatar Terry O'Leary Date: 12/11/2012 3:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    PS Congrats on being featured...
  1. Date: 8/25/2012 8:18:00 PM

    Kurt, wow... that is what's wrong with me... ha ..love it. thank you for sharing :-) always~PD

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 10:22:00 PM

    Nice rhyme, thank's for sharing

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 10:11:00 PM

    Oh Kurt, your poem almost put me in tears. so sad. Hugs, catie :)