Us and Them


Butterfly wings spread
grasping the freedom of life's
opportunities

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Needless wanton hurt
shows in many shapes and forms
abhors my inner


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harry horsman

Date: 9/8/2012 5:42:00 AM

congrats James, glad i've seen these wonderful senryu's

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2012 3:05:00 PM

Hi, James, nice to see you on this winners' list and read your poem finally! Congratulations.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/5/2012 7:37:00 PM

James. , congratulations, with your senryu in Michael's "Smiles & Frown" contest.. God Bless~PD

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/5/2012 5:21:00 AM

Congratulations on the super win in Michael's contest James. Love, Carol

nette onclaud

Date: 9/3/2012 1:54:00 PM

my king delights... special congrats on your award, james!..:) huggs!

Gwendolen R.

Date: 9/3/2012 1:20:00 PM

Wow....the title grabbed me first,...then the depth of this senryu combo took hold! Great one, James. Very nice entry!! Congrats. gwendolen

Joann Grisetti

Date: 9/3/2012 9:45:00 AM

Congratulations on a winning duet.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/3/2012 9:40:00 AM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Linda-Marie SweetHeart

Date: 9/3/2012 8:59:00 AM

conggrats James on a fabulous write and win for most creative lines luv ..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/3/2012 6:51:00 AM

Congratulations James nice to see more of you again you are missed, well done xx

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/3/2012 6:47:00 AM

Congrats James my Poet Brother!!! well done!!! Michael

Catie Lindsey

Date: 8/24/2012 6:17:00 PM

Hi james. this sure is a beautiful poem. hugs, catie :) PS - soupmail

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/24/2012 6:01:00 PM

wish I was in Scotland to visit TOO..such a beautiful place...wonderful people, strong passionate..I miss it..twice was NOt enough! Light & Love

James Fraser Date: 8/24/2012 6:06:00 PM

A lifetime is not even enough to witness what the Highlands & Glens have to offer the eyes of the world. What lifespan I have will allow me to gather in my thoughts of my fantastic country and take them to another plain. Thank you for your always kind words Debbie :) xx

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/24/2012 5:51:00 PM

hmm inner [innards?] what line 6 Jamie? Light & Love