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Everything is gone

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Below is the poem entitled Everything is gone which was written by poet Nathan Fehr. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Everything is gone

Everything is fading
The faces of many
The one i remember, i feel his aiding
But yet today he is still fading

My feelings have left long ago
All but one, all my sorrow
The one that keeps me alive today
Is the one that keeps fading away

There are very few who are close to me
Very few, only three
I hope they don't look down on me
I hope these three get away me

My life is but dirt
I am here for no reason
They don't know I'm hurt
I feel like my life is only a treason


Thanks Damon, Kirsten and Jaidyn for keeping me alive this far. 
I'm glad you are there when i need you.
But sometimes i want you to leave me be due to the fact im afraid i will do something wrong to hurt you.

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  1. Date: 10/10/2012 2:01:00 PM
    In the name of Christ live.

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 5:26:00 PM
    Nathan, wow..your expressing yourself with painful thoughts. I think your feelings will evolve soon, no need to fear you will continue to hurt the people that love you ~Enjoyed stopping by your verse, always :-) *LINDA

    Marly Avatar Bobb Marly
    Date: 10/10/2012 2:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Really you are encouraging this hurt boy to hurt others. Evil only makes more evil. He needs to forgive and be forgiven to heal.
  1. Date: 9/26/2012 10:27:00 AM
    it's scary when you fear what you might do, between me and you, i go through that alot myself but I learne to write my pain, and darkness down and get it out of my head so that way I won't have those thoughts. you're a talented writer and you are so lucky to have those that love you and accept your flaws.

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 5:26:00 PM
    This is a beautiful poem. I liked it very much. Take care and keep up the amazing work. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 5:12:00 PM
    amazing thats all thank you for including me as one of the three