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Haste

Who walks into forever maudlin and seeking heights misplaced ?
What tortured memories, would mankind wish most undone, unsung?
When time's tide seeks to gather grace, with each painful thought displaced, 
Where fullness bursts, how happy will those emptied heart-holds be once wrung?
Why waste the gift of life seeking solace with such unbridled haste.


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  1. Date: 9/1/2012 10:30:00 AM

    Debbie, congrats;-) In Harry's fun fun... 5 w's contest. I think this was a fun contest.. Take care.. always~PD

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 7:55:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Harry's "5W's" contest Debbie. Sorry to be late commenting. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 8:12:00 PM

    Excellent write Debbie! Congrats on your win . Hugs

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 5:09:00 PM

    A belated congrats on a wonderful and well deserved first place win, Debbie! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 8:32:00 AM

    Congratulations on your first place win,Debbie.Each line is beautiful.Hope your are well.Luv,Fabiyas

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 8:07:00 PM

    Debs, I see why Harry chose this one. He is a very reflective guy and this poetry seems just like something I could see him writing too! Big congrats to you on your win. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 7:51:00 PM

    Wonderfulentryinthecontest Debbie; Congratulations on a great win!

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 5:21:00 PM

    an impressive 1st place winning poem; a lot packed into five lines, alliteration and internal rhyme! euphonious and well written :-)

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 9:48:00 AM

    Congratulations on your super win,Debbie.Amazing write.Great job,kudos to you.

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 3:54:00 AM

    Debbie - Congratulations on your first place win with this deeply thoughtful poem! - Gail

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 7:59:00 PM

    Oh my Deb...this is one of your best!...The words flow with ease...you keep gettin' better! - Tim

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 6:58:00 PM

    congrads dear Bet,light and love and huggs and kisses and a huge cuddle.

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 2:46:00 PM

    Really nice poem. Well done Debbie and congratulations on your win. Lee

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 1:03:00 PM

    A brilliant sicilian quintain that adds light to a much needed conversation...wisdom through out, Deb! Congrats on the grand prize in this contest...gwendolen

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 10:32:00 AM

    Mail my dear !!

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 10:09:00 AM

    CONGRATULATIONS DEBBIE..YOU DESERVE TO WIN!!! EXCELLENT COMPOSITION... HAVE A NICE DAY

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 9:03:00 AM

    You took this simple concept, and of course, went above and beyond.....as you always do. Mastered it! Congrats!! (soup reply)..:)

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 8:39:00 AM

    Congratulations Debbie on your win. This is a beautiful write. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 8:11:00 AM

    A most elegant poem. Congratulations on your 1st place win, Debbie. Love, Suzette PS I'm not familiar with this form - you have whet my apatite for Quintain poetry

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 7:52:00 AM

    So wonderful and uplifting!!! MY warmest congratulations, Debbie on your GRAND WINNING!!!! hugs, leonora

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 7:50:00 AM

    Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 7:38:00 AM

    Debbie, congrats on your 1st place win with this amazing write! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 7:16:00 AM

    Many congratulations Debbie on your win in Harry's contest. And what a win with the 5 lined gem. Have a lovely Monday :) xx

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 6:59:00 AM

    Congratulations on a fine win Debbie xx

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 6:38:00 AM

    To a lady with class and a dedicated heart I say congrats my dear, a well deserved 1st place, love and light vie

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 5:42:00 AM

    congrats on your win int he contest.. have a fabulous day.. cory

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 5:21:00 AM

    For sure a well-deserved first placement on this enjoyable read. Well done, Debbie. :)

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 5:03:00 AM

    Congratulations on a well turned out set of questions. Sometimes limits challenge us more than no limits.

    Grisetti Avatar Joann Grisetti Date: 8/28/2012 7:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Knew this would be a winner.
  1. Date: 8/27/2012 4:36:00 AM

    Congrats Debbie on another awesome first place win!

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 4:32:00 AM

    Hi Debbie, congrats on this, what i think is an outstanding poem, and thank you for entering my first contest, harry

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