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HUSHED DREAMY

smooth dark strands night's bewitching charms, grand fair maiden, the knight secretly meets owl hoots, bat flaps, lonely house and thumping heartbeats secret lovers' soft whispers in rustling silk sheets tuned in nature's silent symphony content souls drift, cloudy hushed dreamy 24/08/2012 Yesha Shah Night Melody Trois-par-Huit contest By Nette Onclaud

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  1. Date: 8/26/2012 12:18:00 PM

    love this write, Yesha - a winner for sure. Many congrats on your wins : )

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 11:01:00 AM

    very cool how you put this in the format it's in. You made your romantic too, i see. awesome title for this one!

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 6:48:00 AM

    Very descriptive and expressive contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Yes, chocolate cake is one of my favorite desserts for it is so sweet..Sara

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 11:13:00 AM

    imaginative beauty Yesha.. captivating lines of intrigue and secret love.. good luck.. Nette will adore as I so do luv..

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 7:42:00 AM

    It seems I am Too late for this contest.

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 7:41:00 AM

    Wow...This is superb!You have done a wonderful job with this form Yesha.Love it very much!!

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 1:52:00 PM

    wow Yesha,this is the best I have read,wonderful,you really amaze me with your imaginative originality,I want to know how you get so inspired to write such electrifying stuff,Love this.

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 11:54:00 AM

    Yesha, I love it....beautiful written !!! Wish you luck in contest....(it will win). Have a lovely weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)