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'Lack of Rhyme'

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'Lack of Rhyme'



I wish I could rhyme
promise you I've got rhythm
just not in my poems


©240820121015 

*poking fun at my non rhyme poems*

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  1. Date: 11/21/2012 9:18:00 PM
    Wilma,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 12:49:00 PM
    Beautiful!!Senryu and Avatar:)

  1. Date: 10/9/2012 3:18:00 PM
    Oh come on! Give it a try! :o)

  1. Date: 9/6/2012 3:19:00 PM
    Rhyming poems are in the minority these days. I can relate your point of view in this work

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 5:42:00 PM
    :•) smiles from this piece CTH. hugs n luv Michael

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 9:41:00 AM
    Ahh-- I really don't doubt that you got rhythm, missy! You and I have the same problem with rhymes, ever the elusive ones, eh? And oh shucks, you made me smile with your last comment-- I will wait for the pics! I think I will start calling you the rainbow chaser missy! :D Mwahugs!! Thanks for taking a pic of them, I haven't seen a real one for quite some time now...

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    Date: 9/1/2012 9:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    btw I hope your workshop went great!! I remembered the other day and I got me a feeling it went well!
  1. Date: 8/31/2012 7:41:00 PM
    Very cute, my dear Wilma... gave me a giggle! Hugs, Jack xxx

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 10:20:00 AM
    Well Wilma, I'mfinding this free verse has its meerits tooo and have been giving ita whirl. It sort of frees you in some ways but I find rhyme is a discipline that defines what is written. So both have their good points fo rexpression and you always do a wonderful jobwith yours! I think you are sleeping now, sweet dreams, Love,Lizzie

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 8:04:00 AM
    Hi Wilma like this never poke fun at your work all poetry is beautiful to someone, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 5:36:00 AM
    well wilma I always say practice makes perfect.

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 1:18:00 PM
    lol, had a chuckle at this witty write, Wilma. Hope you're having a happy Sunday lfde

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 7:38:00 PM
    hahaha, well to each their own. Nicely expressed :) Cindy

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 1:19:00 PM
    To rhyme isn't for everyone, Wilma. I'll use it often just as an achor to fasten myself down to earth. You do super well without it! Best wishes, Mikki

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 8:31:00 PM
    this is cute as the dickens, rhymed or not!!!

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 3:51:00 PM
    LOL well..we don't care and the rest of the world is primarily buying FREE VERSE ..rhyme has been OUT, out out for a LONG time! We love you anyway Miss Rhymless Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 2:19:00 PM
    You know Wilma..,wish I could do the rhyming stuff to:) Everytime I write something in my language-it just doesn`t add up when I translate it:-) But plenty of rhytm though,been a drummer since the I was thirteen..haa! Nice write,CTC! Hugs and Love,Arild

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 1:59:00 PM
    I'm with you, Wilma. I'm lousy at rhyming stuff. Some are naturals, not this kid. How about Robert Frost? he seldom rhymed. Love, daver

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 12:52:00 PM
    ha! i like this!

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 11:23:00 AM
    But, oh Wilma, you don't need any rhyme! Your rhythm takes care of any need for rhyme, trust me it does! What you want to say takes precedent over rhyme! And what you say is truly phenomenal my friend! This poem is awesome Wilma, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 9:04:00 AM
    ohh, you got all the right moves, wilms.. i'm more of a freestyle being!... great stuff!..:) huggs!

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