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Fretful Wind

Wind trembles with premonition of a gold leaf's demise, throughout Indian summer's procrastination
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Submitted for Kim Merryman's Contest: Shadorma Style

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  1. Date: 9/4/2012 9:37:00 AM

    Unfortunately this heralds the end of an amazing summer up here... sad to see it go but welcome the dazzling fall spectacles! Good luck Carrie! Love and warm wishes, Jack

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 10:42:00 AM

    CARRIE, congratulations in Kim's contest. Nice "Shadorma Styling Poem" enjoyed stopping by today. :-) always PD

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 2:57:00 PM

    Ahhh!I really like this one..Your creativity is excellent..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 12:51:00 PM

    You have done well with the imagery in such a short form as this. You rock and you know it!!! ;) Cindy Lu aka Lucinda... congrats! Take care and God bless you Carrie~

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 6:40:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in Kim's "Shadorma Style" contest Carrie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 8:40:00 PM

    Beautiful imagery, Carrie! Thank you for supporting my contest! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 11:02:00 AM

    Hi Carrie Just perfect. I love the way you positioned the words. Kathy

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 10:48:00 PM

    WOW another amazing one. I've seen several so far. Love it.

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 8:36:00 PM

    A Shadormazing entry!! : ) I think this is your short-short poem (non haiku). Best of luck in Kim's Contest, my dear friend. Ruben.