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You create a world all Alone

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You create a world all Alone

So many days have gone by 
I wish I had wings to fly
I would of never done wrong
If I knew I would be here for so long
My life is within these four walls
Oh how my life has taken such a fall
It still shocks me to think I'm still here
I still have to wipe away my tears
One by one I count the long days
Higher it gets the days I've been away
I never seem to know
The day I will get to go
So I created a world of my own
With so many people I've never known
So many come and go
Its sad to see them go
Some say they'll keep in touch
But it doesn't mean that much
Cause many who leave this place
Run far from here like its a race
When they're finally out they start to forget
The ones in green so many of them they met
No matter how many friends in here you make
Whether they are true to you or fake
Always keep in mind
This one little line
You come alone 
You leave alone

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  1. Date: 10/1/2012 10:45:00 PM

    Ahh this is amazing

    Gnanaratnam Avatar Julee Gnanaratnam Date: 10/2/2012 11:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you
  1. Date: 10/1/2012 9:58:00 PM

    Very touching and powerful welcome to the soup

    Gnanaratnam Avatar Julee Gnanaratnam Date: 10/2/2012 11:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you
  1. Date: 10/1/2012 4:17:00 PM

    *.* Great Title, 'You Create A World All Alone' ˜ I Like It Like That, Because, I'm A Furry Headed Ball Eagle, Hahaha ˜ Congratulations, Dear Precious Priceless Julee, Upon Your Lovely Beauty's Reflective Feature; Quite Stirring & Thought I Would Try & Lighten The Melruse Moment With A Smile ? Blinking Those Pretty Little Birdie Eyes ˜ My Love, Tristen *.*

    Gnanaratnam Avatar Julee Gnanaratnam Date: 10/2/2012 11:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That was really inspiring. Thank You
  1. Date: 10/1/2012 8:17:00 AM

    Really touching...... I come alone, I will go alone..... I cheerish that two lines, reality, thanks for sharing

    Gnanaratnam Avatar Julee Gnanaratnam Date: 10/2/2012 11:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You
  1. Date: 10/1/2012 8:16:00 AM

    Really touching...... I come alone, I will go alone..... I cheerish that two lines, reality, thanks for sharing

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 1:09:00 PM

    Every day every minute cherish. Play at the edge but keep your feet planted firm. My 2 cents. Michael

    Gnanaratnam Avatar Julee Gnanaratnam Date: 9/10/2012 11:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    That was very good advice
  1. Date: 9/6/2012 9:54:00 AM

    Wow I like but we are never alone just seems like it some times

    Gnanaratnam Avatar Julee Gnanaratnam Date: 9/10/2012 11:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Very true. Thank You
  1. Date: 8/24/2012 2:36:00 PM

    Welcome to P-Soup Julee - You write very good, like this poem. - Hope you will have a lot of fun with poetry.- Have a beautiful weekend. - oxox love // Anne-Lise :)

    Gnanaratnam Avatar Julee Gnanaratnam Date: 9/10/2012 11:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You
  1. Date: 8/23/2012 3:25:00 PM

    Interesting work..Sara

    Gnanaratnam Avatar Julee Gnanaratnam Date: 8/23/2012 10:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You