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As I Lay Dying, I asked - - -

Who will decide my fate? What is to become of my existence? When will I enter the gate? Where are you Lord, I need your assistance? Why am I wandering and full of earthly resistance? Written for the contest 5 W's Sponsored by Harry Horseman

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  1. Date: 9/1/2012 10:34:00 AM

    constance, congrats;-) In Harry's fun fun... 5 w's contest. I think this was a fun contest.. Take care.. always~PD

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 7:57:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Harry's "5W's" contest Dear Heart. Sorry to be late commenting. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 8:20:00 PM

    Congrats on your win Constance. Hugs

  1. Date: 8/29/2012 5:03:00 PM

    Wow, intriguing write, Constance! A belated congrats on a wonderful win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 8:08:00 PM

    this is marvelous. One of the best the way you chose to do it! Congratulations, Constance.

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 4:00:00 AM

    Hi Constance - Congratulations on your win! Well done. Your sensitive soul comes through loud and clear. - Gail

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 2:56:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win. Lee

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 1:08:00 PM

    Your heart and soul wrote this from the most beautiful perspective and I appreciate its depth very much!! Congrats, Constance! Cheers to u! gwendolen

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 10:14:00 AM

    Congratulations! Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 9:08:00 AM

    So lovely, and so you !!! So nice to see you here in the winner's circle!!

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 8:04:00 AM

    I love it! Congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 7:54:00 AM

    Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 7:43:00 AM

    Some very powerful questions. Congrats on your win, Constance! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 7:36:00 AM

    I dare say many persons have lived your words Constance. Fine poetry as per normal from you. Many congratulations on your win in Harry's contest. Have a lovely Monday :)

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 7:01:00 AM

    Congratulations on a fine win Constance xx

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 6:42:00 AM

    Love the connection between you and your creator, congrats Constance on your win, love vie

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 5:36:00 AM

    congrats on your win.. have a great day cory

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 5:27:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well-deserved win with this gem. I like. :)

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 5:05:00 AM

    Congratulations on a winning poem. Full of faith.

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 4:40:00 AM

    Constance another absolute gem i had the honour of reading for my contest. congrats to you, and thanks for entering. hope you are feeling well.

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 5:11:00 PM

    great write wishing you the best Constance La France,check out my When I Die

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 3:16:00 PM

    awesome enytry for Harry's contest, my friend. Hope you are growing stronger every day - love to you and those sweet kitties xx

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 12:46:00 PM

    Another heart felt write, beautiful. best wishes in the contest. It is so good to see you here again! hugs, Catie

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 7:30:00 PM

    Fine questions to ask Constance, bet he is smiling from above thinking, when she gets here, it won't matter anymore, for she will be safe in my harbor, enjoyed your verse, great entry for Harry's contest, hugs vie

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 2:34:00 PM

    This is a very wonderful and ingenious write my friend! I am truly enthralled with this awesome poem! You have written an outstanding piece, Great Work!!