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Below is the poem entitled FUNNY EXPERIENCE which was written by poet Maria Paz Samelo. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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FUNNY EXPERIENCE


Inside the classroom full of students
The teacher teaches about patience
           But there were some lazy group
           Noisy and talking about the latest scoop

The teacher’s patience’s exploded
Beauty on her face was faded
          The student’s attention are focused 
          To the person in front of the board

Silence filled in the air
Listening to their beloved teacher
          Word by word they’ve learned
          But one student fart loudly at the end

Bursting with laughter's inside the room
It’s like time bomb that really boom
          The teacher who is very angry
          Comes back with her natural beauty

Because of the sound she hears
You can see her eyes with tears
           It’s not sadness but pure happiness
           And the class were dismiss…….


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  1. Date: 3/20/2013 6:28:00 PM

    Congrats, Maria. Nice going. Well done. hugs, Ralph

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 7:04:00 PM

    Hello my dear friend Maria! My biggest hearty congratulations on your win too! Cheers! Thank you so much for your congratulatory comments as well. I'm just peeking at soup. We're at school tour now. Very far from Bangkok. Tom. will leave the country but we'll be back at weekend. We'll change hotel today and then go around the place. Again, thank you so much! Take care! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 11:21:00 AM

    Love it!! Reminds me of senior English class and someone farted during a test. The teacher walked to the front of the class and said "Let's not make ourselves anymore offensive than we already are" LOL

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 1:00:00 AM

    Many congrats for this funny write and win.

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 6:36:00 PM

    Maria, thanks for the chuckle and awesome poem.. always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 9/2/2012 11:14:00 AM

    One class clown always brings such laughter, always, any other time, everyone would have thought him diisgusting.. guess timing is everything~ You made me laugh, thank you, Cindy

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 5:17:00 PM

    very cute thank you for sharing

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 11:03:00 AM

    Gosh, this is unusual. I don't think I ever had a student fart loudly after I spoke. that would be really weird!!! your title is most fitting on this one, Maria!!

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo Date: 8/26/2012 12:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks friend Andrea...(^_^)
  1. Date: 8/26/2012 6:15:00 AM

    Too funny...excellent imagery here!!! I work inside a school so its even funnier because I can relate...you're doing good Maria...keep writing!!! Hugs

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo Date: 8/26/2012 12:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks friend Pace...cheers!! (^_^)
  1. Date: 8/26/2012 3:57:00 AM

    yes it funny surely is, love it babe ...it lovely is

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo Date: 8/26/2012 12:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks if it makes you smile friend Don :)
  1. Date: 8/25/2012 10:54:00 PM

    You have a definite advantage over me. I cannot write anything in Thai. You have written decently well in English.

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo Date: 8/26/2012 12:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks friend Robert...have a nice day!!
  1. Date: 8/25/2012 3:46:00 PM

    Lovely rhyme Maria! Love how you've brought out the different emotions of the teacher by describing the expressions on her face. Nice!

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo Date: 8/25/2012 10:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks friend Vicky...have a nice day
  1. Date: 8/24/2012 5:12:00 PM

    Cute one..Got a chuckle..I can think of many reasons that she needed to dismiss the class..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo Date: 8/24/2012 10:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    she/I dismissed the class coz its time already (^_^) hahahaha its break time...thanks Friend Sara..Have a nice day!!
  1. Date: 8/23/2012 11:36:00 PM

    Wow! Excellent write my friend! I remember that I almost got the same experience as yours few years ago; the one fart, the other one who got the loudest laugh has cold and made a balloon out of his nose! lol. Good luck again.

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo Date: 8/24/2012 10:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    (^_^) thanks friend Nore...for yor support,,god bless you always!!