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Halloween Night

Across the land he strides this night,
Amide the living and the dead.
He goes confidently in search of a fight,
Harboring no amount of dread.
He seeks those going bump in the night,
Including the living dead.
Cross bow at ready with hidden knives,
He’ll clear this land he’s said.
Wow to the wicked on Hallows Eve,
Be careful as you run amuck, and hide wherever you will…
For Van Helsings aim is straight and true,
As is his beating heart, a rare few have ever imbued.
And of course those magnificent fighting skills…
No one can ever outdo.
Consider well your choice of path between evil and the good,
For Van Helsing’s waiting right ahead…
To take good care of you.


Contest: Halloween Night
8-22-2012

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  1. Date: 9/22/2012 9:49:00 AM

    wonderful win :) congrats

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 4:04:00 PM

    [shiver] scary!!! your fine verse rhymes nicely ;) fav line [Be careful as you run amuck, and hide wherever you will] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/21/2012 4:09:00 AM

    Congratulations on your wonderful first place win Carol!

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 12:24:00 PM

    Congratulations on your Halloween Night contest win Carol. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 5:50:00 AM

    Well done! Scary poem, congratulations on your win. Lee

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 11:52:00 PM

    Very nice!

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 9:06:00 PM

    Carol, congratulations in Gail's spectacular and eerie "Halloween Night " contest. Much enjoyed stopping by to read and devote myself to the soup.. :-) always~ PD

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 9:27:00 AM

    I enjoyed reading your entry in the Halloween Night contest. Congratulations on your win. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 9/19/2012 2:15:00 AM

    Congratulations on your smashing scary win xx

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 9:54:00 PM

    CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR BIG WIN... GREAT POEM :) CHEERS!!!!!!!!!

  1. Date: 9/18/2012 9:12:00 PM

    CONGRATS CAROL ON A FANTASTIC WRITE AND FIRST PLACE WIN LUV .. CLEVERLY CRAFTED ..LUV

  1. Date: 9/14/2012 4:26:00 PM

    I do believe I in the presence of a great poet! Where have you been Carol or maybe it's where have I been! Absolutely love your style... yee haw! Love ya! xox

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 3:26:00 PM

    Great entry for the contest,Carol.You drew me right into your excellent free verse:-) Best wishes,and have a great Saturday over there!

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 12:07:00 PM

    Niiiiiice. Loved it :) Always, Laura

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 10:02:00 AM

    awesome job on this poem. good luck in the contest. cory

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 5:50:00 PM

    GREAT entry for the halloween contest, Carol. Good luck. I bet we are going to see many halloween treats!