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Light and Dark

Feelings make me smile
when they are not making me
intimidated

Rudeness makes me frown
unless it is well deserved,
darkness flies away

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  1. Date: 9/6/2012 3:01:00 PM

    I like the contrasts in this pair of senryu. Congrats on the win.

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 7:39:00 PM

    Julie. , congratulations, with your senryu in Michael's "Smiles & Frown" contest.. God Bless~PD

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 5:24:00 AM

    Congratulations on the super win in Michael's contest Julie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 12:56:00 PM

    Congrats Julie! Nice senryu pair with powerful contrasting images..gwendolen

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 9:44:00 AM

    thought provoking! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 6:55:00 AM

    Congratulations Julie, well done xx

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 6:54:00 AM

    Congrats my Poet Friend... Michael

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 3:12:00 PM

    nicely done.. All to true.. good luck in the contest.. Have a great day cory

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 3:09:00 PM

    A lot of insight and wisdom shown in this Senryu, Julie...enjoyed reading it - Tim