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Chains of Love

The chains of love do have you bound
  Joy inside of you is no longer real
The life within is hardly found
  The chains of love do have you bound
Your friends are no longer around
   I  do know just how this pain feels
Joy inside of you is no longer real
The chains of love do have you bound

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  1. Date: 9/19/2012 10:25:00 AM

    finding love and falling out of love seem to change one, these chains are that feeling. and your poem is a wonderful emotional account of that.. i really like this Linda

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 10:09:00 PM

    Ooh, nice portrayal of unhappiness at the loss of love in a relationship that looks less than happy, good use of repetition, and the form looks like nice chain links.