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Killer-hunt

Darkness fall's the killer awake's
pull's on his boot's time to hunt
the killer has an evil siniser twisted mind
no feeling's, no moral's, no regret's
just self-satisfaction total gradifaction
the family of victim's he hurt never 
come's to mind
he awaken's in a drunken -drug vision
time to hunt

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  1. Date: 8/22/2012 4:10:00 AM

    Dark... Nice... Terry

    Cox Avatar Bradley Cox Date: 8/22/2012 7:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you terry
  1. Date: 8/21/2012 11:50:00 PM

    Interesting write. Try not to use apostrophes when you pluralize nouns and use verbs conjugated in third-person singular present tense. Apostrophes should only be used when a genitive or possessive case is present. Also, there is no such word as "gradifaction". I believe you wanted to use "gratification" in that line. In your third line, "siniser" should be "sinister".

    Cox Avatar Bradley Cox Date: 8/22/2012 12:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Robert, thank you for reading and sharing with me it will help me become alot better thank you!