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Magic Carpet

Racing through the night sky
high above the sand.
Just bought a magic carpet
cause' I've finally sold my land.

I use to ride a camel
but their to stinking hot.
Just flew right past an airbase
I hope I don't get shot.

I'm going to see my honey.
The one who has my heart.
I still have lots of money
so we can finally make a start.

I land on kelly's rooftop
to show off my new ride.
She jumps right on and off we go
smiling side by side.

We ride around for hours
and time just seems to pass.
I love my magic carpet
cause' it don't use any gas!


Dustin Self (magic carpet contest)

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  1. Date: 9/5/2012 6:46:00 AM

    Congratulations on your well deserved win in SKAT's "Magic Carpet Ride" contest Dustin. Love, Carol

    Self Avatar Dustin Self Date: 9/5/2012 9:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!!
  1. Date: 9/4/2012 6:24:00 PM

    DUSTIN , A LATE CONGRATS WITH MY MAGIC CARPET RIDE CONTEST... CHEERS.. SKAT

    Self Avatar Dustin Self Date: 9/5/2012 9:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!!
  1. Date: 9/1/2012 12:53:00 PM

    DUSTIN, a very nice lovely entry... much enjoyed your win,, always~PD

    Self Avatar Dustin Self Date: 9/3/2012 6:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you! Have a great day!
  1. Date: 9/1/2012 6:23:00 AM

    Congratulations Dustin, what a wonderful ride and winning place and love this xx

    Self Avatar Dustin Self Date: 9/3/2012 6:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you! Have a wonderful day!
  1. Date: 8/22/2012 10:31:00 AM

    lol love it man you get a 7

    Self Avatar Dustin Self Date: 8/22/2012 3:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks man.I wish I could get a real one! Have a good day.
  1. Date: 8/21/2012 10:48:00 PM

    For sure a cheap mode of transport to paint the sky red with. Good luck to you in the contest, Dustin.

    Self Avatar Dustin Self Date: 8/21/2012 11:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks again Delysia!