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  1. Date: 7/7/2013 12:04:00 PM
    Awesome piece Marlon ;) strong lines you got here. Heaven knows how I missed this one ;) glad I got to read it tonight! Hope your weekend is a brilliant one xxhugs W

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 1:00:00 AM
    Sooo, if I don't comment on your actual poetry tonight, I am simply in a rambling mood. Don't worry about leaving comments with me. I am not publicly posting new pieces, except for practice pieces. Everything else are remixes of older work. I have taken some new directions(as in, if I posted these new directions without my name attached to them, people might not even recognize the poetry as my work), but holding on for projects outside of simply posting publicly on a site. 23(lol).

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 12:55:00 AM
    Hey, Marlon. If I don't shoot back a comment, there can be several reasons, but not "bad" ones. Actually, for every 100 comments I leave on people's poetry, I might receive 5 or 6 returns....but I continue to leave comments lol. I listened to the archive of Drake's radio show. You don't do a Mike Tyson(small voice for a big man). You have a very mature voice. You did great reading, especially with "Historical Moment". You and Drake work well together too, just when ad-lib talking.

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 10:46:00 AM
    P.S. -- I thought that I had already commented on this poem. Then I remembered....the comment was left on a whole different site.

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 10:44:00 AM
    "did a bird write this?" -- when you added those words in your comment, I chuckled about something you might or might not have intended as a double-meaning. Thanks for the read. You might not be interested, but I will ramble some anyway lol. When I first posted that poem here, 3 years ago, I am not sure how many people caught the double-metaphor of: "Black feathers always absorb the most light." But then again, the Soup was quite different back then....more "archaic", shall we say.

  1. Date: 11/5/2012 3:51:00 PM
    this is a fantastic write, a pleasure to read, great flow Scribe.

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 3:00:00 PM
    Interesting work that you have penned...Sara

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 12:17:00 AM
    LOL Scribe, i'm very much human... thank you for your fun comment... you always know what to say, at least now i know, my impossible poems are understood... thank you...PD

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 7:09:00 PM
    great write Scribe,you are one of the writers that thrill me

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 7:06:00 PM
    This is one great write. Ienjoyed it and thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 11:47:00 AM
    Right wing, left wing, I expected politics, and was pleasantly surprised. Looking forward to your contest.

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 2:26:00 PM
    clever write. Congrats on your wins, my friend : )

  1. Date: 8/24/2012 10:45:00 AM
    Exraordinary call to action my Scribe! Real vivacity in your depictions of will - Your fisrst line I could happily cogitate on for a week, I admire How you seem to address hypocrisy too " Author not in tune with performance..." although that may be interpreted as automatic writing - see Scribe I'm just brimming with stimulating from your brilliance - " Penguins without wings to perform." is sad and magnificent -J.A.B.

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 9:45:00 PM
    Scribe, "wings around the world.. I know about dirt and book covers, For i live in my own little snow-globe world, I'm covered by the deepest snow a dirty winters ink of my own. You can not reach me because not all of me flies. I love your ability to turn a phrase and poem into 2 meaningful meanings. You never disappoint me. I have a major case of writers block.. thank you for everything xox~PD

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 6:51:00 PM
    I've heard the right brain is our creative side and the left deals with logic. So I need to ask ifthere's logic in ourpoetry which might mean we use both sides! Ha ha- Amazing verse Scribe, you seem to have both sides working perfectly!

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 4:53:00 PM
    thanks for your comments, Scribe. Yes, the Spanish Shadorma was memory lane!! From my splendid months of college abroad in the 70's.

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 11:21:00 AM
    Yes, is it a very deep poem...but soooo well done!!! Bravo, Scribe! - (do not like the new - huggs Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 10:55:00 AM
    enjoyed the contrast approach here, marlon... a defining, penetrating piece!..:) hugggs!

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 5:30:00 AM
    deeply intense write luv with a thought provoking theme speaking volumes.. had to read twice to fully enjoy..

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 5:21:00 AM
    I love the execution of your poem.. Not only from the heart but very deep. nice job have a great day! cory